-Daper I like the name, personally I would try to tighten up the D a little bit but you can do whatever you want. Stay up
Ahem, I like the bottom left and top left the most, those are dope. Son, your lines look a little sketchy to me, maybe you could make them more solid, not like all over the place. There are a couple spots that aren't very clean. I like the S, but the N with the loop kind of throws me off a little. I think one thing these guys here will say, from what I've read (take it for what it's worth) is to take out the extras for now. Keep it up though, hope to see more tags! Thanks for the crits too!
That is so much better, in my opinion. I really like that a lot. You've inspired me to play with mine again tonight before I head to bed! Keep it up man.