I did something with the "P" but cant post cuz phone is a piece of shite. Anyways ill just let u know the letter P is only a small part of equation and if you fix it, the rest of the throw still needs work
I'd try it with a lowercase e. It kind of disrupts the bubbly vibe. The H should probably be tied in and have some parts with thinner lines as well. I dig the name
Hey brother try using my advice ... use the simplicity of the letters, the right size and with two colors you'll have a bomb in your hands with your name on it ... trust me ... look
Love discovering these nice chill spots. Found a hiking trail that led to some old railroad bridges and overpasses. Turns out this place was like right next to a zoo and I had no idea. Was minding my own business out in the middle of the woods and heard a fucking lion or some shit roar and almost shat myself lol
i'm toy as fuck, I started last fall, here are my first throwie ever, I've been coming to this abandoned project housing complex here in Newark alone; sketch as fuck, but I need to practice, and its close by. I know I fucked the "e" up, and the "a" a little. feed back and harsh critique please. I just started painting on the walls literally this month.
[QUOTE = "eman, post: 1916658, membro: 140961"] [ATTACH = pieno] 654716 [/ ATTACH] [ATTACH = pieno] 654717 [/ ATTACH] [ATTACH = pieno] 654718 [/ ATTACH] I'm toy as cazzo, ho iniziato lo scorso autunno, qui sono il mio primo cazzuto, sono venuto qui da solo a Newark, in questo complesso di case abbandonate; schizzo come un cazzo, ma ho bisogno di praticare, e il suo vicino. So che ho incasinato la "e", e la "a" un po '. feed back e critica dura per favore. Ho appena iniziato a dipingere sui muri letteralmente questo mese. [/ QUOTE] Lettera 'E' is too Bigger than Test of word. Devi lavorare sulla shape...especialy on M La tua E is like a pac-man
Secondo S รจ buono, prima P is not bad, work again on the M. Per il resto you must continue to make exercise. Se vuoi, posso darlo you a help.
because throwing is like taking a dog piss when you run away you do it just to mark the territory, and then a throw up is not just a bubble style ... I dedicate this bomb just launched
Round off the outside edge of the P kind of so it balances out with the Office at the end, your L looks like an E somewhat it needs work, your A&T are OK just practice them a little more to fit your overall throwie