Fucked up the drips, and this shit took to long..
Besides that, think its ok
Crits amigos

 

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some throws

 

Can you guys help me with shadowing? I just started and finally found my style for throwie. The only problem is that I don't know where to add my shadows, I tried to add a couple shadows but they looked shitty as hell. (This is just a fast sketch not a complete throw up)

 

Oh gee dude how could you possibly add shadows

 

Trying something new

 

How's this? Def gonna narrow the a, even out the w, toss in shine when I get a marker that can handle it, but would appreciate any other crits

 

I fuck with the letters except the ''a'', but hey I just started dood so what can I say

Here's some toyish trowie that I'm not even planing to do with cans (The outlines look like a shit cuz I can't do them fast cuz I don't have any markers left, so I have to bold the lines slowly..)
I just went with the flow here CRITZ!!!

 

That S is fresh as fuck. Do something different with the leg of the P though lml

 

Hello bombing science forum, it's been a long ass time

 

Here’s my throw
F’ed up the tag a little bit
Crits appreciated.

 

Make the O a bit wider and rounder, and it'll flow nicely

 

Personally I would make the o shape same as the s so that it kinda goes with the flow.
The s is drippin fresh

 

Shameless self bump

 

I think it's pretty sick. If i were you, I would definitely try to put it on the wall.

 

Thank you!
And yeah i changed the P i post later probably a new pic

 

Tips for shadowing and maybe any ideas how to make the top of the letters to flow..?
Don't mind that tag, I was just trying something new

 

try messing with alternating roundish and squarish tops.
squarish tops look good between two curved topped letters, as the 1st letter, and as the last letter imo.

 

Rooftop to traintracks