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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Fube, Apr 10, 2008.

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  1. "Solo"

    "Solo" New Member

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    Could you give me some feedback I don’t care how harsh just as long as it’s HELPFUL I’ve been writing for two years off and on but I can never come up with a solid throwie that I like

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  2. yeti

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    you should make the line in the red circle a little bit longer so that it runs under the line in the green circle; right now it looks like a "t" rather than "s"; I'd also make the "o"s look alike just for the consistency

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  3. MARS1

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    Here is how i make most of my throwies
     
  4. MARS1

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  5. yeti

    yeti Member

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    I'd drop that halo, try to make letters same size and leave that "r" gap unfilled or make shadows for all letters :)
     
  6. MARS1

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    Like this?

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  7. yeti

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  8. mopbucket

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  9. MARS1

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    It looks like Nero or Nerd, i think the R looks more like a S and the D looks weird but good.
     
  10. zEOS1

    zEOS1 New Member

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    opinions? this is my first post btw

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  11. mopbucket

    mopbucket Senior Member

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    Yeah I think the d is too big. And I need to clean up all my lines.
     
  12. MARS1

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  17. ears

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    backwards and a single letter

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  18. ears

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    backwards and single letters

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  19. ears

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    The devil speaks backwards

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  20. yeti

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