Could you give me some feedback I don’t care how harsh just as long as it’s HELPFUL I’ve been writing for two years off and on but I can never come up with a solid throwie that I like
you should make the line in the red circle a little bit longer so that it runs under the line in the green circle; right now it looks like a "t" rather than "s"; I'd also make the "o"s look alike just for the consistency
I'd drop that halo, try to make letters same size and leave that "r" gap unfilled or make shadows for all letters