first throwie, its pretty trash so crit it as much as youd like, on paper i am much better, with cans its a different story
I am no expert at all but I would say if you are going for the boxy look make the s like that too because it looks kinda out of place
1. What is this? Elbow already corrected it in his post. is there a part of the "D" showing through? Or is it a negative space, which you accidentally filled? Eeither way it doesn't really work. See the green "R", I put above. Thats how a capital "R" should look. The two red ones show how I would see the "R" in your throw. 2. Your "H" doesn't have a sharp corner in the top left. So why should it throw a sharp cornered shadow? 3. Your shadow is off centered to the left. But at the bottom of your letters you simply ignore this. Added to squares with shadow, so you can see what I mean. 4. What is this???
Bruh... 110 +330? If your paying 330 a zip you must be living in NYC or sumin. Thats not much of a profit margin but I hope you got to smoke at least. Just lookin out for you man.
That's a lot better now the leg of your r is to big but alot better ! I pay 180 .good friends and family get it for 35 but every one els 40 . I get 1 gram carts for 35 . And flip for 60 Hcp on some henny only right