Ehh.. keep trying.. As for your colours, I'd say try to fade it a bit more. Instead of just fading it straight on (if you get what i mean), About 1/3 of your letter should be faded, and instead of using just the 2 colours, use 3 or more to fade it. (ex... red, orange, yellow instead of red and yellow) etc...
i would say that u both need to stop wasting ur paint and start sketching i dont mean to be harsh but yeah ur letters are wak. when u do the shine dont out line it cause then i doent look like shine. and dont fill it inamd make it so fat just do a circle in the middle then put lines through it ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^preaty proud of this^^^^^^^^ any critzz
View attachment 345547 reaaaaaaallll quick. sloppy but new throw? the last one looks like vezm.^^^^^^^^^^
tezm work on that shit but try and keep that z if u bang out the other problems in ur throw and make the z cleaner it can be some trademark type shit
TEZM work on ur can control and keep it up! wurd... stok cap sucks dick for fades as u probly know haha but im working on that kinda shit and heres a sketch i posted it in the toy book thread but fuck it im gunna paint this soon i hope probly wensday [Broken External Image]:http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/2387/1003607ny4.jpg crits
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nice job on the shine and the blue jamesy. but what are the purple lines supposed to be?? anyways keep it up.