rank that character is dope.letters are good. 3d is good. sick piece.

another humble effort...
crits

 

next time dont add 3d..dont add colour..dont add anything..jus do simple letters

and rank i love it baby

 

Please give crits b4 you ask for them...

Rank - thats doppeee. id like to see some diff letter forms thoh, all ive seen from you is the simples and that style.

Zos - First one is good, second one not so. the idea of using a planet is pretty creative. But yea, get the letters down, get the 3d down, then worry about coloring.

BUMPITY

 

What do you use for coloring your sketches?

 

thanks for the crits xyk, ur character is cool. maybe he cud use a chin tho??and maybe a baseball cap

 

Zos1: it looks like you know a bit about 3d but you need to work on your letters. Loose all the add ons and extensions and just work on those letters. make sure you use bars to connect them so they are structured.
XYK: what do you mean man i have about 4 diff styles?

 

rank-dope letters and a dope character
zos-forget what youre trying and do simples please
xyk-ok thats weird why not just use a pencil first instead of wasting all your ink

 

i think the O looks more like a D

 

akso- mad improvement
zos- stick with regular letters for now. not planets. and simple yo shit down sonnnn
rank- dope as usual
amk- your shit all looks the same...it looks good but alot of them all alike try somethin different
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lookin for people to get on this canvas.....pm me
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hmmm i see what u mean. i can do better letters than that thogh, i rushed that chrome simple. safe for all the crits ima bang out some dope simples. watch this space.

 

this is so dope keep it up man

fucking skills right there!


congrast SEX

 

Sebr Nice Stuff Homie!

 

bitch asses...

 

Trowel- I like the first one but the second one, I'm not really feeling. It looks kind of like bate's style.
Kanr- I don't like the drips from the dropshadow on the first one.
Zos- Do the bar letters


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I made an A I liked

 

i like that A wuld look good beside RO L

 

The A is looking good man, make sure you make adjustments accordingly with the next letter.

 

lookin good rank

 

im not saying you dont. i just havent seen them thats all. all ive seen are the simples and the big/thin letters. sorry if i may have missed the other styles

Eskimo - Thats a nice A. Maybe make the right leg a litttle bit bigger.

Trowel - That shit is hottt. The orange one has a bangin style.

KANR - The canvas is looking really nice man.

Bumpity before school -


Heres the INITIAL concept of what im going to make my main charac. rough sketch, just want to gatehr some crits and ideas.
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And i ahte sketching with pencils, cos my hand sweats, and it smudges everything, gets dirty as fuck

 

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sanrtizer - keep working with the top one, its the best out of the three
eskimo - nice use of bars, keep with it