give it some wierd transparent overlaping color effect

 

the main problem is that y w me too....ima get it tho... hows this?? View attachment 348202

 

loose the upside down cross
and i would say just go simpler like dont even worry about throw style yet and work on letter structure and shit

 

akel thats sickk
martyr the ear lobes on the Rs look weird- work on the letter shapes it all doesnt flow very nice

 

inverted crosses should only be used when painted on or around a church. lets them know whats up

 

word, imo y's are the hardest letters, stylistically, to make your own

 

lovin that fill

 

old piece from 2006 when i used to write akso...i think i've seen an akso in here?
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edit- some more from a whiiiiiiiiile back...
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as you can see i loved my drips at the time

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couldnt get the whole pic in

 

nevermind

 

martyraz- lose those extensions on your r

 

teze mad hott shit same to akel and sez

 

AKEL- like the colours! the letters are fine too
SEZ- lovin them!
(soz for not critting any more but i'm in a hurry)

new nick:
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Bump

 

it doesnt matter as long as your shit looks nothing like his/hers

 

yo glyce- loose the cracks and dont have the top arm of the S hand down and over lap the middle. it would look better that way

 

i think some one on this thread writes logo

 

theres also a guy here in toronto who write gems. and hes rocking it too.

 

yeah im the one who writes logo
lol...
just bored with it

 

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