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Moes - Not rly feelin it sry homie

 

mose i dont like the bottom of the o, other then that its decent

 

just keep a steady hand or the marker blots it

 

like the the rast
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me keep a steady hand?

 

BUMP FUCK

 

Fairly new to graffiti, but have been drawing for a long time. I'll post them from oldest to newest so hopefully you can see a bit of progression in the work. Just looking for some crits. Thanks in advance. BTW this is all I've got right now...
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Thanks again. First post in these forums too btw.

 

Ok.. SICK COLOR schemes and designs.. you got that down.
But first you HAVE to get you letter structure.. dont waste ur markers on ur all that yet... use block letters and do other simple stuff. then once u get good at that add some color.

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take ur own advice skiv lol

 

ha, ur funny fagget. look at his it has NO structure thats were i was getting at. and idk wut the fuk ur talkin about all my stuff is pretty simple and has structure.

 

I wasn't digging all those color schemes. I like gray and darkish blue. with black.

 

skiv i ment the keepin it simple part believe me im right if u lose the whack extensions andkeep ur letters all the same width it will look alot better then

 

Lol thanks guys, I wasn't trying to start shit between everyone, just looking for some crits... Anyway can everyone at least see a bit of progression between each sketch? That's mainly what I'm looking for.

 

ill be honest i think the first one is the best but lose those random things ath the bottom in green.Im givin crits like a motherfucker can i get some back? i mean come on!

 

WHERE THA CRITS AT?

 

ill be honest man i like it all except the throw.Tell u what im feelin generous today ill make a throw for u
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BUMP, CRITS FUCK SOMEBODY SAY SOMETHING BEFORE I GO MENTAL!!

 

do more sketches like this.
this is actually really dope.
like really really.

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I'm new to throws. I can't really do anything other than the "bubble letters"

 

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Eskimo-I like your coste throw in particular the color scheme...since i was already informed on my throw that i need to use bars can anyone give me crit on my tag??