still workin on it thoughts on this one? was just messin around with a fine point and thought it came out pretty cool still workin on this one too. sooo, crits? not too much style in my shit. i keep it simple. but any comments or anything is GREATLY appreciated
ignore the handstyles and throw i was falling asleep in class jers-i didnt know you were that good man nothing realy wrong with it at all rsakens-i dont like any of your stuff its done well but not my style peor-the top of the e looks a little small fable- the b is weak as fuck just grab a page for b's only and get out your ideas ibomb the chars are kind of lame and threw me off a bit cept-dont let 3d overlap another letter
My hands are shakey as fuck from drinking last night but here's a new sticker im working on [Broken External Image]:http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/1496/dsc0431vi9.jpg
heres the first one in my BB. sorry the lines are all jagged, i shake an assload so my control is sub-par at best. hit me up with some criticism. lates [wrapfiend]
try doing basic block letters and progress from there it also helps to draw with pencil first because you can erase anything you dont like and fix it before you have your finished outline
This page has A LOT of nice stuff. mainly on the top. good work. a few sketches. [Broken External Image]:http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0013.jpg?t=1204939635 [Broken External Image]:http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0014-2.jpg?t=1204939797 A lot of these ones arnt sized up very good to the other... the top left one is 4 stickers long. [Broken External Image]:http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0004-1.jpg?t=1204939823
scie, in your green throwie style your c looks A LOT like an f, fix that. your really need to work on your letter structure though, keep it simple dude some throws ive been working on
Scream out- thats looking fresh homie. i liek the circle things on those. The throwie is fresh as well. Scie - keep sketching is all i can say. Ur S is quite alright, but ur I and E look really weak, so work on those. Work on getting those clown sketches more real too. Silent vandal - That shit is hot. I guess im fucked in our battle. AND BUMP. For those who say the structure is weak, could you please elaborate? I don't see what you mean.
xyk- Thnx man.. idk what the whole structure thing means ethier.. but i like the clowns to be more cartoony then real.. (i liked the S also) nice simples u got there ^^^ erase those lines tho.
View attachment 350783 View attachment 350784 scream out- it looks nice so far, but id define the letters a little better. theyre a little too skinny imo. throw is fire tho. the end- its not bad, just kinda messy.