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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. *cept*

    *cept* Senior Member

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    ai71.photobucket.com_albums_i129_shawn6589_DSC_0011.jpg
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    still workin on it
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    thoughts on this one? was just messin around with a fine point and thought it came out pretty cool
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    still workin on this one too.

    sooo, crits? not too much style in my shit. i keep it simple. but any comments or anything is GREATLY appreciated
     
  2. hazetheone

    hazetheone Elite Member

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    ignore the handstyles and throw i was falling asleep in class
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    jers-i didnt know you were that good man nothing realy wrong with it at all
    rsakens-i dont like any of your stuff its done well but not my style
    peor-the top of the e looks a little small
    fable- the b is weak as fuck just grab a page for b's only and get out your ideas
    ibomb the chars are kind of lame and threw me off a bit
    cept-dont let 3d overlap another letter
     
  3. Light40

    Light40 Senior Member

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  4. Scream Out

    Scream Out Senior Member

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    nice stuff here today
    new sketch, i know it still needs work
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  5. rapfiend

    rapfiend New Member

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    heres the first one in my BB. sorry the lines are all jagged, i shake an assload so my control is sub-par at best. hit me up with some criticism. lates

    [wrapfiend]
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  6. Scream Out

    Scream Out Senior Member

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    try doing basic block letters and progress from there
    it also helps to draw with pencil first because you can erase anything you dont like and fix it before you have your finished outline
     
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  7. thesilentvandal

    thesilentvandal Banned

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  8. Case-One

    Case-One Senior Member

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  9. *cept*

    *cept* Senior Member

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    fresh
     
  10. SCIEnce802

    SCIEnce802 Banned

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  11. Scream Out

    Scream Out Senior Member

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    scie, in your green throwie style your c looks A LOT like an f, fix that. your really need to work on your letter structure though, keep it simple dude

    some throws ive been working on
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  12. Xyk

    Xyk Senior Member

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    Scream out- thats looking fresh homie. i liek the circle things on those. The throwie is fresh as well.

    Scie - keep sketching is all i can say. Ur S is quite alright, but ur I and E look really weak, so work on those. Work on getting those clown sketches more real too.

    Silent vandal - That shit is hot. I guess im fucked in our battle.


    AND BUMP. For those who say the structure is weak, could you please elaborate? I don't see what you mean.
     
  13. the end

    the end Senior Member

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  14. Scream Out

    Scream Out Senior Member

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    bump for new page
     
  15. SCIEnce802

    SCIEnce802 Banned

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    xyk-

    Thnx man.. idk what the whole structure thing means ethier.. but i like the clowns to be more cartoony then real.. (i liked the S also)

    nice simples u got there ^^^ erase those lines tho.
     
  16. Scream Out

    Scream Out Senior Member

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    if that was directed at me there are no lines to erase seeing as how it is all done in marker lol
     
  17. SCIEnce802

    SCIEnce802 Banned

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    lol, nope, all thats to xyk..
    but i think u should totally try to erase marker.
    xD
     
  18. garbage down tha way

    garbage down tha way Elite Member

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  19. mxman

    mxman Senior Member

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    sharpie outline, no filled yet.

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    sharpie + ball point pen
     
  20. acereborn

    acereborn Elite Member

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    damn, that character is hot

    why are you postin that in the toy forums? lol