its like random scribbles i cant even read it try make it more simpler like take away the big bit that comes off the bottom of the k and the bottom of the b. and what does it say?
the "klaem" is looking good, just keep writing it.. you will get it looking nice heres my tag in marker...(how i ussually do it) says "TANO" btw [Broken External Image]:http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/3518/jj004et8.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img353.imageshack.us/img353/8162/jj003dd2.jpg
biggz.. that K is sick, whole thing is pretty good..i would add some quotes at the front to even out the flair off from the K, but thats just me. Its pretty long, but stick to it. woozie.. i think you got a good start.. i would get rid of how the lower limb from the K goes all through the A...you may need to add a fourth letter.. 3 letters are hard to get a good flow goin' ight here ill bump this for the new page.. heres my tag in marker...(how i ussually do it) says "TANO" btw [Broken External Image]:http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/3518/jj004et8.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img353.imageshack.us/img353/8162/jj003dd2.jpg
myyy bad.. well wtf is the last letter.. it would make a tight k lmao..all right i got the e now...i was just lookin at the n and e together..still fresh
Uhh... yours are nice to...looks like you forgot to do a quotation in the first one....but in the second i would do away with the little horizontil lines on the line from the O
First handwritten tag I've ever done. I grabbed a chisel-tip marker from work and started writing my name. I'm sure with a good marker it'd look better... [Broken External Image]:http://photos-h.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sf2p/v192/148/86/710342260/n710342260_714911_5731.jpg
BUMPAGE Tano- I like the flow but i still think the T-A is off a bit Cozmo- Not too bad i don't like the line through the center MASRONE- definitely like the stlye and feel but the A seems plain or something, MAYBE JUST ME
Bump.* MASRONE: I'm liking it, the E could do with a little bit more structure. Also, space them out a little bit more and try doing a larrger size. HAJA: I'm not feeling how the N connects with the O. Looks more like the O is an extension off the N. COZMO: Good start. Don't cross yourself out though.. lose that line through the word from the N and keep practicing. VOIS: Going well. Advance your flow and make the letters better looking, don't be too concerned about quotes and lines in the middle of the O just yet.
yo HAJA - i'm really diggin your shit, nice work. i'd say when you go to spray try to go a bit slower. it looks really messy. Cozmo - simple simple simple then come back smikoer - the random words and the ones that you did for other people look better then your own. what's up with that? go back get rid of the drips, work on paper! Here's some stuff that i've been workin on withthe past crits lemme know what's good:
JSBiggz - i like everything but the e on the end moes - few pages back i like your tags a shit ton [Broken External Image]:http://img395.imageshack.us/img395/4885/62543575cp1.jpg tag ive been workin on for awhile fine tuning and shit.