a doodle it might be blurry but i dont know im kinda baked says aker and theres a dragon [Broken External Image]:http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/picture193.jpg
desipher-hard to see. but from what i can make out it looks fresh, and im feelin the dragon quick sketch, crits?
haha thnx man. well i dnt wna go t big boys book, cuz al just get flamed n hated if i do.. also theres still the likes of sky5 who posts in here, and if hes not postin then i def wont in the big boys lool
View attachment 360040 i never get suggestions any more. ! and spoon feeding is not the way forward. Vois..please man..go back to that sharp shit simplish shit you was doing awhile back..it was great and a movable style.
mass, i like the steeze you got going on, but im not reelin feelin how you placed the letters. it dosent have the best flow to it, kinna looks like the letters are floating around in some space portal or whatever. try making all the letters the same size without add ons. just to see how it would look. vois, i actually like what you've got going there, it's getting better. keep the dot on your I straight. and dont use the crayon or whatever you do for the field around it. some shit i did last night but didnt post. ignore the wack handstyle [Broken External Image]:http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/8781/tank2eo8.jpg
Ya, I was using highlighters on receipt paper at work and one sharpie. Just wanted to try more top down shit. Mass I totaly know the sharper shit it much better and the shit you do is always a good example. This style is something i'm looking at more for the begginging of when i decide to grab a can, and doing something like the last one on a door or something is really how I want to try it. And ya jetpack, I definetly thing the dot should be more centered but i fucked up so it went there. Mass- your peice is ill as hell, always like the sharp lines, only crits may be to make the Top of the A a little more like the rest in angle and gap, and the cut back part of the R is thinner and has a different chamfer on it.
desipher- nice. i luv the dragon. ur k looks like an r tho crytalmeth - its ok. is the s supposed 2 b a five? try a dollar sign, it mite work better. and lose the wigglies on the t mass- ive seen tht like three times now! major bumpage still a nice peice tho jetpack-your cracks need them work. i wuld suggest trying them with a thinner marker and if u spray tht use a needlethin cap. i hate givin crits cuz i suck wors than most of yall, but giv em 2 get em rite? hers my newest one. i was told 2 go simple and just work on letter formation so heres an attempt. i kno the a is wobbly, wat else sucks? [Broken External Image]:http://img119.imageshack.us/img119/456/picture020ni2.jpg
keep it up. i gave u one point, u get a 3 day ban for 2 points. evidently u fucked up somewhere else aswell. give me a reason to issue one more point man. the way your going u wont be able to post here, stuck with 12oz where people really dont givva fuck on whats posted. i could care less if your a member of this forum. not smart to make enemies who have the power to fuckin ban u. call me power hungry, say i ant shit but a mod on a computer forum, call me a looser with no life, say u dont care if u cant post here anymore. do whatever. i see your still posting here. think about it before u open your mouth. btw mass, dont take this as a dis, but i think your marker control is better then your letters. i dont know how to tell u to fix it. but im not really feelin it because i see it to much.
[Broken External Image]:http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/4854/img0025nx1.th.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/7360/img0019gp8.th.jpg sorry for the 2nd pic, it,s my desk at school Vois: you got my old name and i am sure that you can have a fire handstyle, nice first Tank2: i love your style man the only thing is that thing on the end of your K fube:clean and simple i love it
[Broken External Image]:http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/7896/picture577dh8.jpg Didn't get almost anything. Oaks - make the letters more bit more separate don't like how A is overlaped, I would like to see sharper edges but it's only my opinion. Amk - don't know realy what to suggest, for me it looks perfect Sawfi - that thing coming out of the I looks very wack, loose it. tempest - make the M flow like othes Tank2 - your cracks don't look realistic. find a picture with good cracks and learn from there. Vois - likeing the first one Desipher - don't like how the second R flows, that dragon is dope as hell and letters are nice too. Ezoyd - dark fills and dark outlines don't work, can't realy see letters anymore with out any highlights
thanks FUBE...stuck on progressing to be honest. spark..everythings good..maybe change the swirl..or add one on the S or sumthing to make it better..i need to do you a piece dont i...can i do a PARK cos man .. im seriously bad at S's...pweeez heres something i did AGES ago... View attachment 360130 i know its hard to see etc. but i thought id post it so i wasnt flicless i was planning on filling all the cars with the cool heads...but i never got round to it...too much work ha !
few blackbook throws more soon mass appeal- im likin the trains, did u draw them? some pretty nice simples keep drawin spark- i dont know y but i like that style your s doesn't match though atomik- being all black its kinda hard to make out the letters try a light outline naik- it looks like the next step on from simples, try addin somethin on the end it seems too short tech- first one is nice clean simple, second is really sloppy, the s is weird
Amk for me it's ok, you can to just Park if that S would rape that whole sketch I have problem doing s's too. Can't usualy match them with other letters n shiiit. Pocs - I like fourth one the most, make that bar of the p lil bit rounder and the o as big as other letters and it would be fine.