View attachment 360145 letsgo- look at other throwies for inspiration but dont bite them. amkrack- you should definitely finish that, its ill. spark- work on keeping proportions. as in the s is too fat. vois- top simple is nice, keep fucking with simples. jetpack- youre definitely progressing, keep doing what your doing. just stop putting those bumps at the ends of the letters.
Wonder what my name is. Took 15 minutes in class so it, like most of mine, is a little grimey around the edges and such. HOERS- I'm feelin the color scheme and the style only thing i can see is that the R seems kinda wide. POCS- I like 2,5,7 they seem like they got some potential to be nice pieces, the rest seem like they need to be tweaked and worked on longer to develop properly.
hoers- im feelin it, but i dont like your E. it seems to narrow to me. your R and S also seem much taller than the rest of your letters. and i know that all those bubble things on my letters look wack oh well. shane- im not feelin the curve in your H and N. you also covered up too much of your S imo pocs- make sure all your letters are legible and not to make them look the same or crazy similar. just made the freshest chicken caeser salad. fucking scrumptious. heres something without any ugly tumors on it [Broken External Image]:http://img398.imageshack.us/img398/473/tank3zt3.jpg
few i missed i bit the c from a local artist, does this still count as bitin, properly? i do it alot when im stuck i take one letter and make the others up myself garbage- is that moers or hoers? the colouring is pretty shady and some of the letters are wack but a little work and it'd make a nice piece tech- make the top bit of the n shorter and sort the s out it look a bit dodgy. good simple though although s doesnt suit the rest and id ont like the curve on the h also make bottom bit of h more square to match the rest or vice versa jetpack- im lovin that simple
letsgobombing, if your gonna bite a letter, try and make the rest flow with it. the letters in your first picture have hard sharp edges, while your C is smooth. try and smooth the other letters or sharpen your C.. id say smooth your other letters
theres only one are it says aker but ya i know what u mean will look better when i ink i got a full page of doodles on it i need to ink just to lazy letsgo: the 8th ones go potential id lose the lil angel wing idea on the p for now might be a good idea later one when u advance hoers:looks good tech: make ur letters more simple and even out the sizes puportionatly(sp) jetpack: sometihng about the T bugs me i think its the little hooks on both sides of the t bar spark: loose the curly thing on your a
pocs i agree with the other crits, when your biting one letter the rest have to look very similar or els e the flow is gone. the throw has similar letters b -ut the points of the top corner should be sticking off of each letter and the p should not have as much gap. ^thatones better..
hey everyone. This is my first piece, just wondering what your thoughts are on it. Any negative or positive comments and feedback is appreciated.
View attachment 360166 Another battle word for a different forum. AMK Nice idea.Looks good so far. Spark Dope simple.Got a nice flow but definately lose the swirl on the A. Tank thats a nice simple too but I'd say make the the bottom bar thats kicking out of the K, bigger.
drakula: nice sketch , nice letters crappy theclown: start with block or alot more simple intaout: nice throw I don,t feel my A but anyway, an 15 minutes sketch [Broken External Image]:http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/8796/img0026wx4.th.jpg
jhahahahahahhahaha make it simple man, thats nothing but a bunch of lines and colors. M A K E Y O U R L E T T E R S S I M P L E L I K E T H E S E O K ? J U S T L I K E T H E O N E S O N Y O U R K E Y B O A R D. kthnx. or you can read the new to graff thread
i inked it up a bit, added some cracks, although there fucking wack. an raby, your shits hot. im diggin the steeze a lot [Broken External Image]:http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/9184/tank3mo9.jpg
dude u need to do more than one extension if ur going to do them or it looked like u have developed more on one letter.
cool beanz, check back in sometime tomorrow an ill have thrown those suggestions into a sketch. i like the whole bigger to smaller idea, although id probably get a lot of dead space at the bottom of my letters. and im not sure on the drop shadow being on the bottom, but ill try it anyways. right now im battling with the K, it always fights with me dammit! cheers for the crits ctso thanks marone