the real outline on the blue peice was black, i did a second outline with white to make it stand out more.and yea, it is a bit to fat, i had to use a pink dot on killz cause it kept clogging my cap. =-\. nice throw, i like how the tops are kind of symetrical.good hand too. and so im not spamming, View attachment 365511 View attachment 365512 View attachment 365513 View attachment 365514 View attachment 365515
New here. can i get some feedback on my throwie. [Broken External Image]:http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/6507/fakeyellowthrowiean7.jpg
dont expect to receive crits with out giving them. but, fix the f up, try to make it less bubbly, the a is alright, fix the k and make the e less simple, and it should look pretty hot. View attachment 365516 View attachment 365517 View attachment 365518 View attachment 365519
5 and a half feet, maybe? if it was touching the bottom like it should be. it would be around 7 an a half feet?
theyre just local freights that run from city to city and back.i dont want to be making excuses but it was broad daylight, workers in the yard.if i wanted to fill it i would have just done a peice. View attachment 365573 View attachment 365574 View attachment 365575 View attachment 365576 View attachment 365577
smooth, you're getting better. only thing i have to say is that on the simple, i'm not feeling the 1 in the O or the swirl thing in the exclamation point.
next page bump SHIE: work on those drips homie. RSASKENS: your second e flows really nice but your first one looks stiffened up.
lol the drips on the table bomb were intentional, not accidental.but thanks for the crits anyway.haha. View attachment 365638 View attachment 365639
in my opinion the intendional drips just makes it look sloppy. keep it clean and simple until you get better can control. Then revisit the "using drips as part of the style" concept. no hate or anything, just work on the basics first. gotta walk before you run. on another note, what's the scene like out in ur area? i used to go to school in springfield, but i heard out west is all CT writers.
i dont liek the 1 either it was just a spare of the moment thing said-kill the copyright thing its mad played,and im not really feeling your b shie-why you posting old shit man haha
haha dude, i could get thin lines with no drips using a pink dot.i just do sloppy throws cause thats what i like, i ussually enver get unintentional drips.and the scene is alright down here, theirs not to many writers, only like 20 that actually get up.
atlockkkk, when you did that shit, and BUMP the fuck out of it. to get those sharp outlines, did you go back over it with your base color? kinda like acrilic or something. fucking good can control, when i looked at your myspace i thought you were in the same boat as i, but i guess not.
yeah i learned it from can2. just do the color you want to b sharp, then cut it with the top color at an angle to make it sharp. its really fun. haha.