first piece ever

 

crits appreciated--

 

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crits are welcome
and yah i know its pretty bad
my second attempt
first was the trek throw

 

humbug i think u need to do em on either a bigger piece of board or out on the streets cause no offence or owt but u cant really tell if your ne good or not but thts my opinion
but i like the 'e' in the bottom one
p.s. i dunno if youo need to say this but im welcome to feed back negitive or positive on my piece above

 

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yo guys

nope- im seeing great potential
fantastic-pretty ill, lovin the colors

bucknasty- love the music and the simples

 

Bah Humbug i think you must to do the pieces more clean!

 

oh and i almost forgot

missutopia- piece looks sick, i would like to see a bigger pic though

 

Why sick?

 

hahaha i think by sick he meant "cool".

 

yes sick as in job well done.

 

LOVE IT, NEXT TIME KEEP THE O THE SAME SIZE AS THE REST
KEEP THE RIGHT LEG ON THE R STRAIGH.DONT CURV IT AN KEEP IT SHORT AN STUBBY LIKE THE M

 

thanks for the feedback

 

oh thanks, i didnt understand before

 

I think you're right, the curvature of the R breaks the balance of the piece

 

morf, im feelin the white outline. makes it pop.

killed the flow. haha
gonna thicken the bars. and take out that line in my E next time.

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stop wasting cans of montata.
go even simpler.
dont link the letters.
dont fill after you cut.
one color fill.
no forcefield, no shine.
And take it to a chill wall, everything looks like shit on wood especially all small like that