bowchicabowow- simple but its decent ENOC- needs much more style Proper- dopppeee shitttt cypress- the circle dot for the "i" is really out of place, keep practicing and adding style Fame.- the tail for the 'e' doesnt really fit, other than that i really like the first one KiefOner- pics not working
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LURE - try and make your letters in less strokes, it's especially noticable with the chiseled marker.
xored- i have to agree that i would change the dot. maybe make the letters flow more bow- its a little to messy for me but its a good start.
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sup guys. i'm new to the game, thought you guys could help... i write YAOTL which is Nahuatl (the aztec language) for warrior give me some crits. thanks View attachment 370934
YAOTL - It's awesome to have a name with a meaning, so props for that. And I like the top two best, although the bottom could also evolve into something fresh. I'd suggest distinguishing the L from the T better on the top two first of all, it looks like an 'n'. And make the 'O' less pressed against the 'a'. PS: usually you are supposed to give crits before asking for them. But I don't feel like doing my math homework right now so I cut you some slack, lol.
actually its not a school at all. its some building in a park. it looks just like a school. they're like offices. or something. RezOner- what do you suggest i add on to the letters. i was messing with it quite a bit last night and i couldnt get anything to come out of it. Globule08- what do you mean go simpler? like just write the letters as they appear on the keyboard?
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like maybe put them a bit closer, or slant them. just for a start. maybe even have a pick up line, if you know what i mean like '\/ but with them connected. just look around at tags that have your letters, and go from there.