that looks a lot better than your other shit. watch your lines, there bumpy. keep it smooth, and when your making the bar wide to thin, do it at a slight rate. nothing too crazy like what you have going. i dont like the S though, dont overlap the letter with itself. and the middle bar on your A, line it up with the bump on the outside of the letter. straighten the A a bit, and push the S and O to the right a bit. make it flow a bit more
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poor cais haha k dude lets see... what needs work the C and the S are lackin abit and the A doesnt flow with this style of piece P.S ...♥
New Name, new sketch Here is one of my better ones.......sorry i had to take it wit a camera sucky ass quality i know i suck......please no shit, just advice [Broken External Image]:http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/IMG_0257.jpg
once again: -atlock, i love your stuff/style alot (especially color) the only thing id say is the curly of a looks a bit out of place. -:/ haze good...how should i pronounce that... - okae nice, personally i'm down with that "o" but i dont know shit - white....what way should i go? advice: probably the typical "simplify and work on structure" [Broken External Image]:http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/2724/dsc00915jx3.th.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/152/dsc00913hd9.th.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/6375/dsc00912xe0.th.jpg Hopefully i get a smiget of crit this time. HOW WOULD U LIKE TO SEE MY PENCILED ONE FINISHED?
dont throw in flair yur not good enough loos aaaaaaalll of the arrows look at the new to graffiti thread in the stikies itl explain everything ther
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brink, it's really hard to tell those are even letters, sorry bizar, you've got some pretty decent letters, but the 3D is off and i'm really not a fan of the spade thing on the I's. bumping these, which one are you feelin the most?