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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    A) paint more
    B) happy birthday
    C) battle me fuck. it's the 18th, get your paint.

    mass rass, lets have e-sex
     
  2. NoCanControl

    NoCanControl Elite Member

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    ai24.photobucket.com_albums_c22_xmm89_Photo_0056.jpg

    dont' mind that character..... focous on the letters crits?

    mass, i like how you make white an extra ordernary color.
    cais, i like your coloring always, and uhhh, its tight but the right leg of a is fucked, and so is the bottom of the i and your cracks on the rocks are unrealistic.
    smoothnuts, the bottom one's face reminds me of ewoks piece on youtube.... but i like the first two alot.... specially the a. the face on the secound word is too cartoony, almost like.... idk little kid cartoony.
     
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  3. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

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    hahaha
    you dont have to be rude :(
     
  4. Mass Appeal

    Mass Appeal Banned

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    i wasnt being rude...you my little chuckle butty who i dearly love.
     
  5. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    no can control, im really feelin those simples. add some 3D on it an i'd think it would look pretty phat
     
  6. DECO ONE

    DECO ONE Senior Member

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  7. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

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    deco one-dont write ve....
    nocancontrol-looking good would be better with a drop shadow :D
    and amka i'll do you a throw if you do me up one of those funky fresh pieces :p
    edit:he's in the toy thread...
     
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  8. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    said, edit yourself. this is the tot thread.

    deco, do simples man. like this. V E R B. it'll look better
     
  9. SAID

    SAID Moderator

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    can control, lose than fill man.
    if your gonna do it in orange color your wholeeee letter in orange not just one part.
    as jetpack mentionned, drop some 3d on that.
     
  10. Mass Appeal

    Mass Appeal Banned

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    ugh i still have a freaking ROKE to do.
    but whatver...expect it in the next few days if not week.
     
  11. CharmTwo

    CharmTwo Member

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    astatic3.filefront.com_images_personal_c_charm2008_132573_kpqxnikdhn.jpg

    Constructive Criticism Please.
     
  12. Mass Appeal

    Mass Appeal Banned

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    lose the arrows
    lose the colours
    get some paper
    get a pencil
    sketch simple block letters

    all after reading the new 2 graff thread

    hope i helpd
     
  13. DECO ONE

    DECO ONE Senior Member

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    I dont write VE, i write VERB, but i stopped at the VE cause i was drunk, and tired, hence why its only 2 letters....and unfinished...

    I do simples...but isnt this where we are supposed to post our Attempts at more complex work? LOL
     
  14. CharmTwo

    CharmTwo Member

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    Wasn't very consrtuctive dude, that's just telling me how to write in your style, which ain't my style. Nothing on your deviant art is much better than my stuff? Perhaps I should post a whole range of pictures, this really isn't my best one, i just thought full colour would be more appreciated...
     
  15. IlikePie

    IlikePie Elite Member

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    >_> No, you suck, get over it, pull your head out of your ass and read the new 2 graff thread. He's not telling you how to do his style, he's telling you, you need to do simples and then out of that you develop your own style... Don't post until you've read the new 2 graff thread.
     
  16. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    for charm two and deco one. neither of your are going to get anywhere without the basic knowledge of letter structure and simples. no one will be able to read what your painting. which makes your pieces pointless.

    your cant do complex pieces without being able to do simples. thats like trying to fly without wings.

    do simple block letters until you can make alphabet letters look good. then your ready to work on complex shit.
     
  17. CharmTwo

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    Um i just realissed I forgot to mention thats my first ever sketch, here my latest, which I think has my own uniques style included.

    afarm3.static.flickr.com_2346_2502277775_c4bda18da2.jpg

    If you don't like I don't care to be honesty. I'm not down for the whole graffiti culture. I like putting pretty pictures on walls. which I'm quite good at.
     
  18. squidone

    squidone Senior Member

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    ive been working on simples for a few weeks now and ive got the structure down but any time i try something more complex it turns out looking like shit

    any advice on what to do?
     
  19. CharmTwo

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    AT Jetpack.. its not about someone being able to read it for me? It's about me being able to read it and be satisfied that it has artistic quality.
     
  20. IlikePie

    IlikePie Elite Member

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    Then leave. Go and put your pretty pictures up elsewhere.


    And your drop shadow is off.