Wow i just put some of those blob looking add ons like on your Note piece on one of my exchanges..without knowing you put them on that..they look a little different though :/ shiiittt.



anyways..crits?

 

haha

 

esole that shits dope the first E is a lil fucked but overall its good

 

Bets all i can say is try and keep your letters at the same hight and size and im not really liking the splatter things idk why im just not

 

Like vandal said, ur 1st E is kinda nowhere from the other letter But i can't really talk because i'm not enough good to crit ppls

 

Esole, I can kinda dig it. You should make your 3D a lot longer and probably go in some direction other than directly left (boring). make it longer/deeper, because you don't want to have all those spots in your letters where you can see the white of the paper behind them. It leaves a lot of negetive space that's just icky to deal with. Also your letters are kind of out of position (compare where the bottom of your S is as opposed to the bottom of your E) if you made them all follow tha ttrend, it'd look much better, but make them at least straight across if not. Also your second e is the only letter that doesn't use any lapping, it looks like it's OCD or something and it's trying to not touch the other letters, so it's bent in a weird way that throws its flow off balance.

 

ha dude dont worry about it. i wasnt the first to do it. i took it from some one else

 

i write bets normalls, this was an exchange with esole, but yeah i get you with the E..im used to it being my second letter so yeah

they are. I always draw a strait line and keep along it. the paper is bent so it looks weird (see top of pic)

thanks yo

the 3d goes up and to the left. it fits this style imo. if it was any bigger i think it would look tacky on this particular piece. I get what your saying with the last E not touching. ill pay more attention to that kinda stuff in the future

 

Double letters are a bitch!!

 

haha for sure. yeah i seen it and was like "wow i just did those like 5 minutes ago..." lol

 

Soneone can tell me what kind of style i should try my tag? Because mine is weird.. and not good!

 

you need to start out with basic bars and thats it dont worry about your "style" because if you just do simples and you'll develop one

 

Okaie but did u saw my sketches? if yes please crit it

 

Sorry for the double post.. But can someone give me a website where it give tips for tag?

 

yeah and you had some OK letters but you need to loose all the extensions and just work on your letter structure

 

But.. What is a letter structure :O? Im stupid sorry..

 

the best place to find this stuff out is in the new 2 graff thread heres a link to it

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=2185

just read the first two pages and follow the advice

 

bump over pages worth of bullshit

 

looks dope life.
nice use of bars.





drawn out of boredom.
i <3 writing played out names.
...the K gave me a good idea for a new R though.
fuck dead prismas and over flowing decos.
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