desipher / phaser: lose the squiglies in the e and r shuk: lose the arrow at the end of the k, and work on your handstyles WBS throwie: crits?
Pegcity boy - the throw dont have any flow try makin em all caps View attachment 374949 short EV throw crits?
PegCity - Just work on the flow, try a diff. "B" Evade - Clean enough, go paint it. Fube - Always killin shit. Exchange..
evasion, i think it would be nice if you would lose some of the doodles in the e clout, thats really nice, very clean. meh, i rushed this once i finished the initial outline.
loving that shadow clout like all the letters except the middle of the m just practicing letters [Broken External Image]:http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/5053/scan2izh4.jpg
nice I would like to do nice letter like you.. My structure suck soo bad... and my colours too.. Can someone give me a hit for my letter structure?
[Broken External Image]:http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/4034/picture648wk7.jpg My shitty throw. [Broken External Image]:http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/6629/picture651xp1.jpg Think maybe this S is better. Hmm.. still looks like shit. I'm embarrased about my throws. Anybody have any advice about throws? Every time I try them they suck, or look like someones else ones. [Broken External Image]:http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/8448/picture642pu7.jpg Hand I be working on. [Broken External Image]:http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/8840/picture628pe2.jpg Pen freestyle I made at school. Jetpack - Too big S don't like the k leg. E should be a bit wider maybe. But good and simple. Fube - nice and original Soboe - Not feeling your S and R, but otherwise it's realy dope. Deco one - Don't like the super long bars. But it's fine, just make the bars not that long. Arsn - on first one make the letters more apart from eachother. Maybe it's only me but I can't realy read some letters beacause they are too together. Second one is realy as raped. Go do some straight letters don't even color that. Kans - nice oneliner, N and S need work on that piece a bit. But it's dope! Lasic - make L,A,S more separet. Use warmer colors for fill. Desipher - that's rocking! Shuk - take your time. the K bar is too big on the first one.
Deco that last one is pretty sick spark ur throwie looks like it would take a while to put up if u plan on fillin it in
people are gonna say seperate ur letters. and the top of the r is more skinny then the rest but wow thats a super dope s
It looks okay, but you need to distinguish your letters. I like that original dripping sludge too, hahahaha