no fake dips i mean

 

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still working on it but I really feel like my flow is getting better
critique please what else should I work on?

 

^ adre?doin good so farrr. just work on ur r sttuff, teh a next to 3 lokks good

 

Take th d r and e from one and put it with the a in four

 

Testin out some ghetto junobo
Crits?

 

thanx allot guys
damn that junobo is nice
I got the same exact one if thats orange thats the one
you have to squeeze it while you write but if you dont its gonna look like shit
yours looks really nice thought props on that shit
cant wait to see how it looks on the streets

 

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it says faker
its on a toilet door
them drips aint fake it wa dun with a krink
i dunno why it driped like that

 

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bumpo
it was done on a door and they aint fake drips i dunno you they went like that
helpful critz

 

man u already got crits. loose that shitty underline

 

has anyone ever wrote just "oner", nothing else?

 

some shit faggot around my area has. hes a shit faggot, believe it or not.

 

atlok- marker?
zerg- nice throwies, just not feelin the quotes haha.
work on your "pixely" one. it's good, but not feelin the arrows or work on them or something.
overall, pretty good tho.

 

thanks mate! Im not using qutes now and I need to do the pixel one with a ruler and outline it alot thicker

 

sorry its small yh i know its pretty toy so can someone help me to improve?

 

rawr someone with my name! hahah, jk jk, idc, but you should work on legability.

 

fuckin around on the computer

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i like i like.

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ASPEK: nice name, nice lettering. work on the underline and left quote