i have to say im not liking the backwards C or the fill calm it down so we can see your letters. and your girls...maybe you can help her out
mass appeal why are you even in the toy forums? anyways im not realy feelin the backwards c but wutev sum new stuffs crits please? View attachment 375656 and View attachment 375657 personally i like the 2nd one more but yeah crits away
so tell me why my last three crit posts got deleted. do you read what you're deleting mods? vandal -- your E's lower isn't lined up. more importantly your extensions look like balls, learn to balance your letters too. lime -- please tell me she doesn't get up... haha for real though, both of you need to hit the new to graff thread session -- make your letters solid outlines. don't cut off/separate the bars like in your B and K. don't bother with that notch shit on your E either. do straight up outlines. don't bother even going to the stuff in your 2nd or 3rd pieces, just stop doin it cause ya ain't ready for it. ras -- nice, selectively bold some of the leftmost part of your a, it looks a little out of place being so thing on the C. rsakens -- Es are awkward and too thin. stretch em and make em a little less stiff. otherwise looks ok made -- keep at it, solid simples. more marker freeze. the A is bad. [Broken External Image]:http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/8073/37879623qv2.png
Deco's piss me off sometimes. Session - That second one has mad potential. Just fix up the A to flow a little better, and maybe try a Capital E.
View attachment 375686 for a homeboy at school View attachment 375687 unfinished shit easer- shits nice, i just dont like the bottom bar on the s. maybe make it round off like the e's sample- besides what squid said, its pretty dope. i really like that s vandal- give crits to get crits lime- tell ur girl not to write haze, for ur peice lose the extensions, if ur not usin bars use em session- ur letters arent bad, do what sample said and just keep sketchin amk- im diggin that more than ur usual stuff