Kobra- looks better with the holes, but i would lose the lines around them
Smile- I like the M alot, all the letters except the S actually. The dot on the I seems too big though

 

Thank you for the complement Hater! And yea I guess you could say ive been gettin up with those.

 

Here something new I chage my throwie. I removed the x's and added O's is Dope to me. Im not done colring it. I just wantted to post it. Crits Plz!

New
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Old
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the E's suck, I don't do them like that anymore. any crits? thx.

 

I think the dot on the i is to big and the S is sloppy

 

Crits?

kobra it's nice but the lines in the middle make it look kina lika an h
But idk really you probably shouldn't listen to me hah

smile make your letters the same size and clean that s up

 

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two of my earlier throwies. i used that crappy walmart paint on the first one as you can probably tell.

 

Can I get some critique?

Kobra: Might want to tighten up the R and A. It kinda loses its flow at the end. Looking good though

Resk: Love the style.

 

kobra just fix ur ra n itll look good

 

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crits?

 

I could see that on a wall somewhere with some wild ass colors for the fill. The N looks a little too much like an H though.

 

Not my best, Not my worst.

Any crits?

 

the spot is old but i still rock this throwie
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yeah thats always my problem

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eak i like that throw

 

All your shit is dope snap, but you put no originality into your "N"s, still, they are dope

 

The H and the N still looks exactly the same. Looks like OHSHAP. Other than that I like it. Keep it up Yo. The one with the blue bubble is the best so far.

 

i know im a toy cuz im new to graff. sorry about the size
klic

 

tranzit. from when i first starrted graff

 

ohsnapizzle, try for the N making the horizontal slant higher up on the left if you know what i mean