^go a bit simpler(edit:both of you,cora and viruz) ahem-no.2's the best nap-looks like a good start for a one liner,work more,seperate letters. gupe-liking the first one a new idea that i've just found.the heart starts from the e View attachment 378956 View attachment 378957
don't bump for crits right after you posted,look like at my post on the previous page,and give crits before asking them
viruz, none of your letter flow at all. south pole, i see some potential try a new O and R that match the style of the T and M, ohh and get rid of the heart.... please. Cora, You need to try to make some letter before you start doing them all fast and conecting them like your doing, you C looks like a D in some of them, on your O looks like an E, define your letters, but with style and flow
South I like it. But the The first letter is inconsistence. I thourhgt it was a Z and a D at Frist. But its a T right. The one in the middle and the Center are pretty nice
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Bump this up and you guys need to give crits if you expect to get any geez. Torn the n needs work looks like an m
Mabey dont make you line on the A soo long be it tight. Just fix the R. [Broken External Image]:http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/TekTagz2.jpg Crits. I chaged it a little.
dotn make the t or any other letter the underline, if u want make ur t by having a simpelt top just a line, then start and flick ur pen down for teh bottom of teh t, and see if u liek how it goes out, or maybe just make it hook slightly at the bottom teh E is pretty basic, and the k will get better over time
Dot the I cin, and Viruz, all your letter are like standing out to much, make it look like a word, instead of adding so much "style" to each letter.
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