dude that tree is fresh. i have no idea what happened to your talent but the first one isnt working at all, is it supposed to be a way overcomplicated A? i would say strip it down to how you did the second sketch. second sketch works out alright good use of bars and cool background. the cut in of the top right bar of your k doesnt work for me and i dont like the wierd little squishy pointy things at the bottoms of all your letters. but damn that tree is tight
sorry about the double post, these are the latest sketches. [Broken External Image]:http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l8/IanCasserole/Mia2.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l8/IanCasserole/moa2.jpg and this is a strip i scanned in two parts, the 3d is fuckedd. [Broken External Image]:http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l8/IanCasserole/nas2.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l8/IanCasserole/slr2.jpg
yea lol the 3d is fucked but the letters are nice and clean can, that second ones background gets me all hot and bothered lol idk what it is but i think its super fresh, and the tree is badass. still workin bars more. [Broken External Image]:http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/1243/img00146ge7.jpg
dude im feeling tose G U and P but ur problem is the E aww that uper bar dosent flow with all the rest... maybe try making it more umm strait? btw that tree rocksss i love it XDD anyways heres my shit... [Broken External Image]:http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/3663/1506081616jd4.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/981/1506081617rx9.jpg and heres one for a battle... [Broken External Image]:http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/9663/1606081022zt5.jpg any crits ppl?
i like the middle B the sketch...umm not ur best...dosent really flow to me maybe cuz not my style...
quick shit from this morning. gotta get my simples back on point. and before a million ppl say it, i know the hand off the o is "cliche"
yea, i see what you mean, but you didn't follow threw, i see the bars on the outer side of the letters but on the inside, where the holes are, they ain't following the rules... do you get what i mean?
ew at the extentions on the left side of the l and the long extentions coming out of the o's....haha edit*yeah i get ya man...i just like the rounded off rectangle haha ah well im done with that shit ima go back to what i was doing before
dude your letterform is dope but i thinkit would be way sicker if you kept your bars equal width for the whole bar, i can see you were doin it on purpose but i think your letterform is so solid that for at least your main bars it would look better if the bars stayed simple. and i dont like the extension of the a that cuts down into the k, it looks forced as opposed to helping the letterform. way dope coloring though, especially on the 3D
View attachment 380272 An SAS character i drew...im going to redraw the whole thing because the paper is fucking shit to render it...and also get a better scan.. Im posting it here so i know if there are anythings up with it before i begin to redraw it.. There is some missing down the middle so try to ignore that. Hes placing his supressor on his MP5 for anyone wondering what hes doing. Thanks.
mass-yeah he looks fat,but i'd say thats due that it was done on 2 seperate pages,(am i rite?)and those pages look a bit spaced,looks nicely made though emel-not feeling that much,the fill and back ground looks dope,the only letter im atleast feeling is the R,not realy liking the letter form,sorry,would look better if the bars had all the same width. nocancontrol-damn you,this tree is sick as fuck,not liking the first sketch,don't know what you tried to do(an A?),the second sketch looks decent scare-haha,i agree the 3 dee is fucked on the last ones,your lettering looks nice though revid-the hand is cliche ,,j/k maybe try making it do something (eg: Pointing on the piece,or using a spray can,or w/e feels good to you) bet-niicee jupe-nice simps,nothing more to say