ya thanks i only did those 2 extension bars on the E because i couldnt think of anythin to keep the peice flowing and when i didnt add the bottom extension it looked wack
SEK, kill the extentions ERASE, use pencil first for the characters. so the lines don't look like spider legs. and your piece isn't very good. go simple. and don't do three deee unless you can keep those lines parrrellel RSAKEN, I really like the photo, it went good with the flow of the photo. i might have to try... heh. RASEK, make your s the same size as your a and e, and you'll be good... CA, that style is wierd... don't do it.... you should um..... go simpler. i tried really hard not to make the k look like a s bear with me, on the s..... heh.
no can control... thx for the advice... i really like ur first sketch.. its true that the K looks avit like an S but its not that bad...
Here is some of my book work View attachment 381911 View attachment 381912 View attachment 381913 And an attempt at a character and my tag, came out retarded, but its my first and I'm getting better. View attachment 381914
Yea I did. I was reading the thread yesterday heh. Anything in particular? I'm trying to soak in as much advice and help as I go. Those sketches were on my second day of ever doing graffiti.
View attachment 381916 this is fuckin sick as, u got a bigger flick? View attachment 381917 ur proportions are fucked up a lil. ur legs are the same height as the top half of ur body, alsothe shoulds should be 2 heads wide.
bump, yo vandal man. good job on those simples. finally your shit is lookin nice. fizz, the best advice would to keep sketching. itll get better with every sketch
jet-nice,but try making your letters all the same height vandal-not feeling the add-on on the E,and the fill's too dark
ya im not very good at making e's i always have a tough time rasek thats pretty dope but not really feelin the a and e you should jus make a new a and keep that e just make it bigger then it will be ill
rasek- i really like that one, i wouldnt make the A or the E any bigger. Its obvious that it was done on purpose, i think its tight. Vandal- the E was fine before you colored it, its a pretty tight simp tho!
[Broken External Image]:http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/4780/ersrwithcaracgr6.jpg bump for crits plz Fize: do simple block letters like on ur Keyboard Vandal: focus more on the letters and not as much on the colors/fill drop the little add-ons for now
[Broken External Image]:http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/8269/picture228st8.jpg not my name, just messing around with letters and styles, so no bitchin about how your boy writes svor