SANEK - I like the first one the most. Good flow, letter and color wise. Except for maybe the K.

Ehhhh, im tryin to come up with some throws...anything worth workin with?

 

i only really like the e but what do you think? i missed a bit of 3d on the e, it says test

bumpo
sanek- the first one is good but your fill is really weird, the simple on the top of the third page is nice, just dont point the bottom of the s, take that bit off the k and forget about the fake drips then you'll have a solid simple
ease- its ok, keep workin on new styles though

 

Did a little somethin' for my boo. It all needs work.
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edit: And I just noticed I totally missed the dot on the J. Lol.

 

still not finished.
fresh?no?
crits!?

seeoner-bars.now.
letsgobombin-good job usin bars and shit but flip the crossbar on the t. looks like YESY
Jers-holy fuck those are fresh.

 

cheers riot i thought their was something about the y and didnt know why it didnt look like a t

 

Not very clean lines and sorry for largeness :/

 

today was a bad day =/
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not clean could not get my hand still today =/

 

for the BLACK battle.
crits?

gotta outline and add 3d.

 

the l is looks ok ^
goo simpler with the rest !
block letters are the best way to practice & to
letter structure hommy

shit thats a dope character !

 

First and foremost, zkatz, make a special effort to keep everything the same proportion, as in make every bar as straight as possible. Make sure the letters are the same size as well. Do not try to warp and bend the letters either. Keep it simple.

Riot, I'm definitely not feeling that 'A' to me it looks like an 'H' with a weird extension. I think you should tilt the bar on the right so it's slanted more, that'll make it look more like an 'A'. Lose the arrow on the K. Also I think you should lose the stars.

For my work, be nit picky people, I want you to tear my shit apart.

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alright. ill fix the K and A.

it didnt really take my time and it definately showed.

 

clout-avoerlap our letters more and rework the letters....i swear i did a toss for you,work off that sht
rsakens-im really feeling the last one man and the green and yellow train none of the others though :-/
zkatz-use bars do simples and a dropshadow and read the new to graffiti thread...NOW!
sanek-the sanek and sen simples with the drips...dkeep doing em...and do em bigger....and kill the drips...haha

 

beyond- thanks for advice i will definatly try to
smooth- i will go read the thread now

 

waoh first person ever whp wnated todo shit on their own...i got ya man
ghoul-i like the last ghoul sep the o you should make it like an oval not an oval with a dent in it haha
straight letters looking good too

 

all these are lookin dope....were u get the printouts of the trains?
the only ones i have seen had two each page.

 

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looks sick
yours too keane

 

my first cartoon pic, what u guys fink =)?

 

Simple oldschool funk.
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looks good med work on the char a bit
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