Med, don't have the M and the E connected. Also don't use those bubbles for a fill next time and try to get some markers man.
Delvoid - nice char, especially if that really is a first for you, im not feeling the skateboard at all though, dont get me wrong, it is well done it just reminds me of something you would see on a t-shirt at walmart or something haha MedTwo - clean start dude, dont connect your letters and i think it would look better if they werent overlapping as much, keep it up Shoook - nice concept, its not really working though, your C looks fucked and your A looks nothing like an A, im going to say stick to simples for now, once you got your bars down maybe try some calligraphy-ish bars because thats what your shit now reminds me of, just suggestions i havent been arount in a while, been fuckn with some different names lately, im feeling this one though "Unspire" i know this sketch needs some work, its the first one with this name
work sketch, feelin all hip hoppity. me likely your sketchy screamy. and yes, i know i fucked up the vinyls. lollerpop [Broken External Image]:http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/263/rasek32uf2.jpg
hahaha arrowless hip-hop i lol'd nice letters btw rasek, i would just change the 3d a little, like having it on less of an angle, its making it look a little goofy in my opinion, kinda like you messed up or something even though it all seems to be placed correctly. oh well, shits nice regardless
RASEK: I like u're style but it seems like u keep doing the same stuff over and over again. try changing u're letters a bit more I have no idea of how i pulled this off... first Wildstyle gone well. no bitting or what so ever. just 5 FUCKING HOURS! an i've been trying to paint it on photoshop for 3 hours now
I like your O, but for everything else is a bit weak and not much flow. You did a great job on it nonetheless. My problem is i spend 5mins making the sketch on the letters and rush things, too used to doing quick tags and throwies.
consistancy gets solid letters. i only show you a portion of the sketches i actually do. i usually do 2-3 on a workday.. the letters slowly come to me whenever they want. when i try to force them. they look like asshole. your sketch is pretty decent, the extensions arn't hideous. get a better grasp of your letters and try it again.
that rasek is sick. i love it. none of that twirly shit i get lost in. the extra stuff is sweet. like candy. And its that good cause he practiced that style mad hard for the last how long? dont tell him to switch it up. when hes good and ready and thinks that one is killed he will. but it gets better and better each time.
the extentions are placed correctly for the most part, but get the letters down a little more. as in dont let the V get skinny then fat, and dont disconnect the bottom circle of the D from its main bar.
Cheers for the crits.. I don't need markers though, coloured pencils do me fine, and I've got no money anyway. They're all just quick sketches from my little book, I'll scan in some good ones later. Some more quickies: [Broken External Image]:http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn283/roten187/Image0127.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn283/roten187/Image0113.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn283/roten187/Image0062.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn283/roten187/Image013.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn283/roten187/Image0112.jpg
just made this in photoshop. been looking for a decent printout for a while so i just made my own off some pic off the internet. heres a small version. heres the link to the full pager. HERE just thought i'd share.
I have ones the exact same that I printed off a while ago. [Broken External Image]:http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/9237/image0114uj4.jpg