ehh i think theyre are tomany cracks and thye look mad unrealistic which ruins it :-/ but the 3-ds looking krisp
shitty webcam flicks Micro [Broken External Image]:http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/5822/192450bg2.jpg tester [Broken External Image]:http://img372.imageshack.us/img372/9660/203703fq7.jpg the elephant,piece, and beam shit is mine. chickens is my bro and aliens are my girl
the R is nice man, rock it. you do a good job of it, i like the angle. loose half the cracks an it'll be dope. once you get a letter down, the rest of the letters will flow with it. rock that shit son!!! i wanna see your letters flow more the fuck do you smoke man? you've got 100 thoughts and ideas on the same page, you should run with one idea a sketch, it'll be easier to follow. you spelt several words wrong as well. anyways, heres a new steeze im tryin to work on. my bad oak, just noticed its two pages scanned together. makes a bit more sense now. [Broken External Image]:http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/1993/rasek34cz1.jpg
Damn, thats a fresh piece, I'm lovin' that. But work on that hanstyle, it's too closed up imo. And the top of the S should go farther to the E
rasek, i like everything but the k, dont ask why i really dont know lol bigel, get that shit out of the toy forum, seriously...shitting on all of us
very good,your starting to get some style,i like the R,A and the K contrary to other guys in this thread but uhh,i couldn't hold my self when i saw the S and the E View attachment 385522 edit: sorry guys,but i can't hold myself,got clout,for your cracks,they look more like veins than cracks.The lines shouldn't be so thick,they should fine,not too fine though,and the lines should be str8, heres a pic that explains it all View attachment 385524 View attachment 385525 ^^not asking for crits,just showing an example
Thanks everybody, and TORN like I explained, the lines are only so thick cause the shaprie I was using kept spreading. And I know I went overboard on the "cracks" hah. Theres always next sketch. MICRO - I think I like that piece. Crazy fuckin color scheme. BIGEL - Always on point. Nice. RASEK - I dont even have to tell you to paint it, but....DO ITTT.
clout - nice shit..id take south poles advice..the cracks are a little thick the end - nice fills and style primative - i dunno what exactly youre tryin to do big el - dope heres some gay shit..i need crits to improve
joca-first one is on the right track That 'r' the cracks look like seaweed or some shit Oaklander..thats not graffiti go to make a garage sale sign Big L you have somekinda album??? this is some quick shit(pen outline) [Broken External Image]:http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa13/bobbby_fisher/IMG_2691.jpg