just another tweak

 

Hey changed the style a bit i did a shity job. Crits welcome.

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Steel I reccomend that you dont color intill you get you sketches down packed. But yo make your throwies quick. Thats why their thorwies also not feelin the Whole.

 

M+S, if that's an "R" at the end, I'd change it to an upper case letter. I never see mad bombos with lower case "R"s.

Cosmic, Keep sketching. You'll get better with practice. And for comparison's sake, the older style is better then the sharper one you just posted.

Here's one of mine that reads "Golem". It's a one-liner, and I kinda fucked up the "E", and a little tiny bit on the "M", any crits?

 

ummm cosmic.....work on makin ur letters look the same for now...like hold on ill show u

 

why the fuck would you do a throwie with a marker?

 

Hey this is my new one i think it turned out better than the other ones. Tell me what you think.

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yo cosmic ima put up a throwie of ur name....urs is gettin there tho keep it up

 

Because I was just passing by and didn't have anything except a few markers on me.

 

Eh

Cosmic It's gettin there keep trying

 

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my garbage, trying out the uppercase A.

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Yarbles i think thats fresh.
Spectone looks tight

 

Wallace, not feeling the uppercase A too much.

 

crits

 

Yo safe those are tight I really like the bottom one.

 

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i like your newest one cosmic