Not bad at all man. Really like the first one. For PATHOS.

 

420 posts!!

 

pathos
that first one is nice looks like you toke a big marker done a tag and outlined it
props for that
on that 2nd one the arrows kinda ruin the whole thing and the letters arent that great either just feling the H / I in that on the bar of the T is a bit to thin that does not flow to well with rest

3th sketch is dope man i have nothing to complain strait simple letters
thte alphabet is strait but to boring don`t really like it ...

 

shity quick pen freestlye outline with bacl sharpie blah blah blah blah

 

ya you got it on the tag outline. its not really the same handstyle that i use for tags but i know what you mean. i got a tip a while back to outline my tags and i feel like it helps me see what good spacing and form looks like for getting better at piecing. i always try to do two sketches for the battles. one that is the "tag" outline, and one using the "bars". i've never done well with the bars, i guess i'm still developing a taste for it, and i think it'll do me better in the long run, but right now i feel like the simple shit just looks better and when i go out to paint it's easy to translate from the practice in the book to the wall.

 

Yea Here's some of my new stuff. I didnt like the Pecice tho cause I tried to add Arrows and it threw it off. And Over All I just think it looks bad. But what do you guys think. Crits? {BTW I've been givin Crits all day so i dont want to here about Give Crits to get them. Just sayin. }
O and by the way....... I HATE ARROWS!!!!!!
Also Befor you Crit the Character if you do at all. Know that I got it from the Ethernet. Okay, I like the Character and its Dope, and since no one else used it or Claimed it Im used it in one of my Pecices. So just know that befor you say Viruz is Bitting.


New Style Im workin on.
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Skull Kid
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yeah dude, just lose the arrows.

 

I will Im doing that Same style with out the arrows and with a Differnt Color Scheme. It going to be dope.

 

PATHOS- yo i feelin the colors bro...i like your styles also...something that you could do is add like a character or something in the backround..an what kind of markers are you usin j/w..but besides that ur raw as hell bro..
KRISK-bro i really like the black an white copy..unique style..but wor on the letters a lil bit an youll be srt8
RASK-lol i like ur letters..but spice up the back round in the future..

 

O just pass me huh...... Okay I see how it is......

 

bumper cars blah blah blah

viru-i swear i've seen that skull some where before :/

 

VIRUSSSS-my bad bro i didnt even see yours if i did id say somethin man cuz u crit my work..but ne ways..raw ass character man lol..and i like your colors on ur word..the backround could use work but the letters are pretty kool man..sorry bout skippin u..

 

bump no crits on this

 

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Some bubble styleeeee.

Smooth nuts I like all the pieces you posted apart from the last one you just bumped.

 

word i dont like that one either :/
but thanks man
im really feeling that shit raby sep the arrow for the whole in the b...aside form that i love it

 

yea

 

jesus. i love this grimey style. i'd change the extension on the t. kinda makes it look like a C. but i know how hard t's are.

the tag is sick also. the e's and the z is mighty fine

 

just did this.
critterz?

 

virus: u've bitten that char from somewhere... i know i saw it before...