Freka- the flow is ok, but you need to work on letter structure projectlink- need to work on your letters, looks good though New style I am messing with, critz?...
EMJ- cant read it so cant criticthe structure but u should put a 3d for it to look kooler... Hater aid - sum letters have weird extensions, go simpler... [Broken External Image]:http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/4581/img0469bq3.jpg
zebra for a exchange [Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/Picture-5.jpg?t=1217362429
JOGA - J should up a bit higher. And the 3-d fade lines could be done better. Check the big boys and see hows its pulled off correctly. And honestly, im not feelin the handies at all. ERASE - I think some of the extentions on the first E are covering too much of the R. And im not sure if I like how far the legs of the A are going down.
bump these really feeling your structure man im loving this bomb man keep this shit up View attachment 392975 just a quick little garbage simple from like 5 this morning i did after lookign at some gost ris shit.... i swear that dude must of dide crazy ammounts of acid haha
EMJB the only thing id say is the right side of your first one looks a little crowded with all the extensions and doo-dads... maybe you should pull you letters together more so you have less space in the main body of your peices... sorry for bursting your bubble. i looks good overall, but theres always room for improvement. and SIX youd prob look better without the thing you did at the beginning and end.
ease its weird how the letters bottom hide but i guess it makes sense em jay bee thats kinda creepy aim i love it six i love it but the S looks kinda weird speak about the future in the past tense: [Broken External Image]:http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/1008/0730080035wr1.jpg
Smooth: That A is pretty damn cool. Clout: Ill.......I really like thoes. I know......The M is garbage
hard to follow some of the shit in here cakewalk - stick with bars and keep em the same width but heres my stuff: View attachment 393036 View attachment 393037 View attachment 393038
Holy shit, so much better than your stuff before. Keep at it, just try thickening up your bars, and make it more simple. But sooooo much improvement in like 2 weeks
Cakewalk-looks a little too wiggly for my taste, smooth crisp corners and flowy lines are were its at Kean- dope looks like all the letters just fell from the sky and landed like that heres a pen freestyle from tonight at work, the fill is in highlighter since its all we had View attachment 393058
[Broken External Image]:http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/7358/babyg8kjhw2.jpg I think this speaks for itself mate.