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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Sarto

    Sarto Senior Member

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    The r is a bit blury from the pic.
    ai317.photobucket.com_albums_mm397_sartoner_002_8.jpg
    Mr y- make the bars on the a the same as the ones on the e and k , im not digging the k but the e is fine ,
    Mr. A- loose all the extensions and go simpler,
     
  2. mekosbc

    mekosbc Senior Member

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  3. 6rave

    6rave New Member

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  4. Scream Out

    Scream Out Senior Member

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    gel pen n marker freestyle oh yeahhh
    my R's still look fucked, the K too but less
    ai91.photobucket.com_albums_k301_Inhumation_Photo342_1.jpg
     
  5. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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  6. erase2

    erase2 Member

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    scream - looks nice
    yarbles - nice simple
    sarto - i like the colors, but i think you should of carried on with the 3-d inside the letters, if you get what im saying
    meko - good color choice and leters are nice

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    bad color choice on my second one, new name so i was trying out a handie on the third
     
  7. aintnoway

    aintnoway Member

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  8. CROSS EM OUT AND PUT A K

    CROSS EM OUT AND PUT A K Senior Member

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  9. Snew

    Snew Senior Member

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    Yarbles- nice simple.. maybe make your bars the same width.. it looks alright tho..
    Sarto- I really dig the letters and thie fill, just make the 3d the same distance everywhere, kinda like in your O it goes top to bottom.
    Noe- Sick throw, i really like the letters and fills on the bottom one. keep it up.
    Erase- awesome steeze.. those colors work fine together dude.. just space them out a bit more, awesome flow to your pieces tho.

    i think i got a bit carried away with the extensions. I dunno tho.. i like my fill at least.. haa

    ai45.photobucket.com_albums_f90_goonies3845_Photo37.jpg

    Crits please..
     
  10. DECO ONE

    DECO ONE Senior Member

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  11. simple zen

    simple zen Elite Member

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    finally got a hold of a cam, finna post some shit within the hour... got some simples i came by and i'm gonna post them.
     
  12. numberonestunna

    numberonestunna Senior Member

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    erase2 - lookin good, just make your C more apparent. and on the second one with the extension the first O looks like a D to me..
    aintnoway - idk man im not really feelin the style.. color choice is alright though.
    forces - real nice simple, fix up the S a little tho, its kinda weak.
    snew - get rid of the connections in the letters, add white highlights.
    deco one - thats a tight piece, i cant touch that 3d style your doin. nice work.
     
  13. Fube

    Fube Elite Member

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  14. South-Pole

    South-Pole Elite Member

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    looks alot like mare139

    forces-yes moar moar,i see some potential there
     
  15. Thrice

    Thrice Elite Member

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    What about mare 139?!?! Straight dirty deco.
     
  16. devil at sea level

    devil at sea level Member

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    scream- i think the r's better than the k but whatevs...angle the top rght of the k on a 45 degree angle not horrizontal
    octone-dope
    aint no-lose the brown bits and extensions on the top-make your letters have the same bar width
    forces-word. nice simple
    snew-those extentsions are pointless, and yea i love simple fills i had one like that a couple pages back...

    critthisplease..

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  17. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    ai34.tinypic.com_kbrc7r.gif
    Before I add an s or a z
    Any crits?
    Oh and I fixed the curve on the right side of the a

    sabs go simpler, use bars.

    forces that's dope it's got alot of potential

    snew spread your letters out more and lose those extensions that are inside the letters.
     
  18. rsakens

    rsakens Elite Member

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  19. WoeInfinite

    WoeInfinite Elite Member

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    Keane that shit is tiiiiight.

    W i wanna work with, but i cant get an O to look good next to it...
    ai60.photobucket.com_albums_h26_SoopaxVillain_081708_17281.jpg

    edit;
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    ehh?
     
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  20. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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