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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. WoeInfinite

    WoeInfinite Elite Member

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    yarbles i like that.
    go out and make it into a huuuge roller.
    :)
     
  2. (SoS)Viruz

    (SoS)Viruz Elite Member

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    Woeski- Yo man the "W" to me is a lil too spaced out. Close it a lil.
    AKES- Nice but I would make the Bar on the "S" Bend a lil bit more know what I mean?
     
  3. Lucky1313

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  4. sky_one

    sky_one Senior Member

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    erase- dope man! the 1st piece whas my favorite
    lucky-put the leters at the same distance
    rsakens-the 1st one is cool that ideia the second loved the colors
    aeks-nice and simple i like it
    i hope you ppl give me some crits
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    didnt like just modifaing my style a bit
     
  5. VoyR

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    ai532.photobucket.com_albums_ee326_david_voyer123_voyr2.jpg

    Critz, suggestions? Its missing something, and I cant figure out what it is.
     
  6. Mass Appeal

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    VoyR .... Its missing 1 . Correct letter construction ,that i mean BARS , 2 . a decent 3d .. fuck 3d you dont need 3d at the stage your at now ... you need to focus only on LETTERS and lastly the cracks arnt beleivable .. they look mega weak .. look at the pavement outside your house.
     
  7. sky_one

    sky_one Senior Member

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    crits please
     
  8. Mass Appeal

    Mass Appeal Banned

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    Mane...you have some decent idea of lettering ... but at the moments all the extensions are out of proportion , place and the letters arnt alinged correctly ... the 3d is also wrong ... the New 2 Graff thread has some top notch guides on doing 3d ... and maybe save your colours for when you get better and begin painting... redo those letters on a straight line with little but no extensions ... then youll have a decent little peice.

    Atleast your using bars aswell .. thats a good sign .. you got potential my little hubba.
     
  9. Lucky1313

    Lucky1313 Member

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    i fixed it and made it all even
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  10. sky_one

    sky_one Senior Member

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    fix the Y and its perfect ;) (i think lol)
     
  11. Lucky1313

    Lucky1313 Member

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    thx im gonna fix it cuase ur right there is something wrong w/ it
    lol
     
  12. sky_one

    sky_one Senior Member

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    heres something i did now training mi D i realy liked the M on the botom
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    crits please
     
  13. (SoS)Viruz

    (SoS)Viruz Elite Member

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    Sky-Yo how long have you been Writing Sky???? I can see you are using bars which is good. Stick to the D that is next to the one with the Arrow. Work with that. But they all look good. for the most part.
     
  14. GIzUrD

    GIzUrD Senior Member

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    still havent found a good R yet...

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    theres alot of MEGA toys in here lately... but oh well, as for crits:

    LUCKY none of your other letters overlapped so neither should your Y

    SKY the bottom M would look ok without the arrow and the... basically simplify it just a little bit

    AEKS would probably look better if everything was spaced out evenly
     
  15. nemzone

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    ok so its me ur residential stranger. ive been in iraq for past 3 months. got home on tues, and been on a bender since. but im hungover now so im gona chil for a few days.. i see ive been missed here.. duno why lol:p unfortunately i dont have flicks.. cuz got NO time to do shit in iraq. but yeh im always buzzin around, and will always return wen i got time.. also its a lil dodgy typing in this address on a government computer in iraq lol. so yeah, i painted once in the past yr and a half and it was only a throwie!!! not gona waste my time even posting it. just wanted u all (or whoever still knows me) to know that im still on it, and will get sum flicks for yas before i fly back to iraq next sunday... yeh sorry for postn in here with no flicks, but this was my old home, so figured i would post here.. check me out givin ma life story lol.. neway if u want, pm me, il get back sometime, but now im gona go look at the flicks thread for inspiration again..

    inspiration has been as poor as a big bag of poor things lately lol



    peace NEMZ
     
  16. the end

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  17. Thrice

    Thrice Elite Member

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    A toy is a toy man, but giz you're shit is hot as hell. I recommend beefing out that R to balance with the G.
    Sky-the one letter that is most off style with the others is your E, fix it up and it should be looking good.

    Crit for my A plz.
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  18. nemzone

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    dont add things before u got structure and flow. props for goin simple. but ya need to understand how to make it look good before u add things..
     
  19. Mass Appeal

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    Props Nemz ... much respect man.
     
  20. erase2

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    forces - looks sick
    deco - finish it
    sarz - lines are a bit shaky, but nice handstyle
    keane - nice style and colors
    made - really feeling the one above your colored piece
    voyr - the o and y seem off balance
    gizurd - looks ill

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    i know the e is a little off on the last one