i hat excuses for shit work as much as the next cunt but in all honesty this is all iv done in like a year. was dont the nite b4 i flew to iraq... ignore the hand
ask those arent real throws, plus the real ask burns you [Broken External Image]:http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/203/picture324cg9.jpg
well burn me as he may, im the only one in my area that writes it (902 - Nova Scotia) so i dont much care about my name... Ive been using it for 4 years, im known by it, im not changing it.
Try making a play on the word. Like AskMe or Ask?s. I think that last one would be dope. That might be totally unecessary, depends on how big the "real" ask is.
well my catch phrase is "Ask about me". And yarbles, if you are going to crit me, fine... But don't try to rip on me when what I have destroys you. A seasoned veteran, sure rag on me all you want. As long as you have the skill to back yourself up.
WHat the fuck? Don't fucking call me out your shit dosn't burn mine. For four years you suck fucking dick. You really wana see who's better then battle me.
Yo chill ppl. Yeah yarbles was harsh but it was true. It does need work. and ask sorry no you don't burn yarbles. Ok settled cool dope fresh ill sick n shit.
youve been writing for 4 years??? damn kid... ive been writing for a year, and i shit on you my advice to you is less talking more sketching, a lot more sketching...
yarbles I give that throw a license to ill. Cept the N i weird make the top and bottom storkes more offset, so it looks less like an H, I can still read it but it'd look better.
Yarbles - like the A. E is passable except for that little mark on the middle bar of that e. Both K's look kinda fucked, but the 1st looks better than the 2nd one. S is passable. O is fine. Last E is fine except for that little mark in blah blah same thing as the other e. General form looks pretty cool. Osnap - Word, that's sick. The character i don't dig as much. Drop the character or make it better. ask - keep working. More. Not so many add ons. Keep it simple. Same thing I told shaolin, look at ideas in the non toy thread. I penciled mine. i like it. I'll pen it later, when I get pens. Which might take a while.
My reaction to that. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BANkMaLJaY4&feature=related Im just kidding thanks for the crit, i'll fix it.
Haha. IT'S NOT A TUMA OK ITS NOT A TUMA. Man, I can't believe that guy is the governor of California.
new stuff Just trying some new styles. [Broken External Image]:http://www.teamhac.com/pictures/Picture013.jpg I colored over my finger to further stay anonymous, am I white, black... red? [Broken External Image]:http://www.teamhac.com/pictures/Picture014.jpg I like that ^E^ and no i didnt bit this, if you think i did, sorry ive never seen it before so it wasnt intentional. (i did each half of my name in a different style, its ASKONe, not just ask)
Ask, not feeling the first one so much, I don't know just doesn't flow nice I suppose, but what do I know. As for the second one, it actually looks quite nice, maybe spread the lines in the middle of the N a bit more to make it a bit more distinctive, looks a tad like an H atm, but it's pretty good. Pas, I'd say stop the lines on the s before it reaches the A if you know what I mean, so you can actually see it's an s, but it's pretty legible, maybe add a bit more style to it, but nice and simple is good. Yarbles, looks sick, all I can see is that on your N at the bottom, don't have a gap, I'd just have the line, but it's up to you of course. Mine, the wall was pretty dirty, was wet and grimey and just grim, but I gave it a go. Crits would be muchos appreciated, ta EDIT - God damn it this happened last time, never use photobuckets editing tool, doesn't seem to work when linking pics =/ Just have a go at reading it
what does that say? on the last one that thing after the s and before the e looks better than your e, the k needs a lot of work especially in the right bottom corner, the s is the strongest letter of them all [Broken External Image]:http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/6136/picture327aj4.jpg