hobbes you trippin' B, like you on a schizophrenic beat talkin' to yourself swiftly like no one noticed see? so deceive the deception and let the essence relate the elevated relation to constant constipation of the mind an aneurysm in time with the ability to fly so fucking tied up with a tide to wave away the swaying waves like commotion could motion the commode into being a station for deep thought the dried drought would seek a distraught thought to think like puking up knowledge into a sink just to swallow it again information no matter how disgusting, that shits your friend only your only friend like know me, homie? don't make amends I'm an amendment you can't mend with loans to lend so if you attest this than please, reset this and rest kid like constant axles that travel on wax the friction would slowly detract and subtract till the groove was just right, the move was only moving on movie night but absence was your type of abeyance, obeying the hiatus like shit this is the type of lame membrane wave that will inevitably shame your stains so don't rate the rain if you can't smell it first, predict the quenching of your thirst not hungry enough to feed my eatery but rather steal the bread crumbs like thievery I'm on a scene you see but you can't perceive it because you would leave it left dead on the set the set up was not yet set the table missing forks, the plate breaking with your face aching to be placing your complacence adjacent to my thrills, not here to brag about ills, 'cause if life gets to real then you can fill in the fillin with a shade the color of your parade, stomp through the town with no fucking grade grains would fall like drops dripping down the wall but if you had no relevant information to relay, what the fuck could you say? I tried to make this one as easy as possible to read...no cheap "fix that" but just line breaks...typing freestyles is bullshit though, sometimes there's a lil more to MCing than cliche rhyme-endings. Like assonance, alliteration, and other types of word play that aren't best conveyed on the internet. I doubt people even know how to properly pronounce certain words anyhow...kinda like how ill and feel aren't supposed to really rhyme but if you distort the word it can work.
"ITS KICK TO THE CURB TIME, YOU A CHEAT LIKE NIGGS WHO USE THEIR ACCENT TO MAKE THEY WORDS RHYME." Jakki disagrees haha...
well I'd agree with jakki...thats not really my style, if you notice I rhymed "Ill" with "fill", but still used "feel" to distinguish the difference. I also rhymed "thought" with "distraught" and "thought" because DROUGHT is pronounced differently, and I like distinguishing different words. If I wanted to correctly convey my style on the internet via typing, I'd have to format it for certain people to understand. But ahh, silly me, thinking I'd get props from bombing science just because I've been practicing my freestyles in real life. Gotta love those car rides where you can rap loud as fuck and not worry who hears.
haha right on man^ i feel ya. And the last time i gave props on some shit that someone spit i got dissed on haha. so fuck it. Typing is most definately totally different than straight up freestylin. Takes you alot longer to type a word rather than just sayin it. And theres no beat behind so peoples flows are harder to pick up on.
it looks to me like vice got a vice grip on these rappers throats tellin em to speak up just to hear they voice croak they chokin on his rhymes n his lines are like three ropes looped into a noose tied to support beams of three boats and three boats are on the dock wit ciderblocks above they pedals ready to meet the metal of deck floors for four scores in which he settles once he gets the pin number to the account offshore then funds transfer like vd's in the business of soft core
once again you write to much this isnt a freestyle, im just telling you i use this for for fun i have no ego when it comes to this i just like wordplay, none of these verses mean anything more than a quick go at having some fun with words on the net but obviously you're too serious to realise this btw strapple is a word http://www.answers.com/strapple just because it comes up underlined red dont mean it doest exist ya fuckin tool but yeah ill "battle" you, not right now though, i just came to check a pm and saw this but keep ya eyes open for my reply, prolly in a few hours when i come back
I figured it wasn't a word because it didn't sound right, was underlined in red, and google, which you would think would have a more solid definition system, said there was no definitions. But okay, ya' got me... "i just like wordplay, none of these verses mean anything more than a quick" well maybe you should diss MCs who actually have verses that mean shit? I realize its the internet, and more specifically bombingscience, but you'd think people who are 'addicted' to writing words would be a bit more respectful towards good wordplay. Maybe people spend too much time writing only 1 word... and like I said, this ain't the "diss the cypher above you" thread so I wasn't expecting to get somebody knockin' my rhymes just 'cause I was in the mood to post something. besides, its not like I'm going to just let someone knock me 'n not say shit when it comes to certain things. Example; someone goes over your throwup with a throwup, you go back over them, preferably with a piece.
Stop being a bitch, its the freestyle thread. More disses are flying around than fat chicks getting out in dodgeball
yeah well I'm that fat bitch that catches dodge balls throw it back quick, watch your ass fall all the calls will be in when I'm catchin' it hot like spicy you thought it was something distraught but I taught you like the student teachin' the teacher leeching information out of you like can't take a new cloud to heights so high raised up like the taste of a chicken thigh breast taste better on lye, still talkin' 'bout the spicy buffalo wings I just ate some and it made my tummy sing now thats the shit, that is the THING like rock solid flavor, get what I'm gettin' at?-- comin' back fast with a new kinda track to detract your focus I'm rappin' without no hocus pocus magic tricks are mysterys unsolved, my rhymes are just something that needs to be dissolved whip out the solvent, put in some salt and dissolve it like sticks breakin' twigs I'm a lil bigger than a big you can't even understand my shit because I'm the man made kid whatever happened to the "diss the person above you" thread...thats where the stupid lil disses should go. I'm pretty sure thats why the thread was made, so people who are just trying to kill time dissing other peoples rhymes wouldn't piss off any members who actually take MCing somewhat serious...as someone pointed out awhile back in this thread, no serious MC should be posting here but shit I'm boreddd
Its okay, I've taken balls to the face before... (that ones from a movie! but I actually have taken non-testicles to the face before) Chew up ya' nuts when I catch 'em 'cause I don't fluff, like ketchup! Catch up to the theory, I fucking hate tomatoes...
thread locks head rots cuz his rhymes is weary my punchlines explode ya flow like naval mines in lake erie
ima fuckin jackass, at birth i shoulda been named eeore cuz i run in project buildings to the 18th floor and raped 3 whores and left with them screamin behind me ''WAIT....RAPE ME MORE..'' tht made me soft, so i had to take detours ended up at AC Moore decided to steal painties for..... my damn self ta paint these boards old bitch came at me like ''have you no shame. pay for it and they be yours'' i smacked the shit out of her and said ''NO BITCH WTF you think i blaze treez for'' then them 3 whores from the rape catchin up,, if this old bitch didnt make me stall if i had spit game them whores woulda paid me for the great meat balls in due time there may be more....to be continued
to be continued... so i continue on with the story proceed wit the raping deeds but step up on the gory factor above fourty stories, push the whores n watch em soaring down the the pavement, the rest of they days spent eternally snoring pouring out they heads is that pink and red mush that stuff that gets my lust up dick hard and bout to bust i must get a taste so i run down the fourty flights in a rush huffin and puffin, trippin n grippin railins, get cut from rust my cut gushes puss, infected wit tetanus or hep C say fuck it, continue on with the mission to get the brains that been spilled and fill my cup like nestle throw it in the blender and shred it like sigs of sketch3 DRINK UP
and im drinkin up lift the cup till it hits the mug and start sippin chunks as my vicious cuts from the frikkin rust still drippin puss ta numb the pain i start sniffin dust think i need medical attention but the scent of my breathe might get me put in sum federal detention cuz im one of satans students cuz these earthly lessons just made me truant i execute any act of violence i feel like i was made a do it kill a toy for taggin a ugly ass throw thts fake and stupid take a broom stick,,,and stick it up his anal poop shift??? sick of takin bullshit.....make me wanna spray a fullclip but i dont have a bullet ta use......
so i use a bullwhip and i crack em in the back toys dead bodies i stack pack em in the freezer, 1 by 1 pull em out wit a axe and hack. hack em to bits n throw they chunks in my mornin grits eat em up while i heat up they organs in a pot of rotton corn to form some trips. i rips the flesh n guzzle some rebutess to ease my stress my chest burnin like sermons of devil preachers preachin to bless
make sure ta scrape the bowl till im left wit nothin snatch the blunt from ya sig and get ta puffin just ta get E-high i beat guys wit re-plys since i was knee high while toys beat guys by gettin between thighs you kno i got the best spits next bitch, ta step get, they neck twist and end up in Unconscious breakfast take this word of Ad-vice from this cat vice get slapped twice if u think you rap nice