Looks very well now, although you have missed the final outline a bit... And it seems you have lost your can control on the K... I like the way your A turned out!
i ALWAYS struggle with the forcefeild...is there any tips on doing them...personally i think its the best iv done..i like the style of it too...
yeah the 3D's deff off, i like the concept of the fill tho and the white on the 3D, it just needs work, oh yeah you missed a spot in the middle
Well, try drawing lines parallel to the outlines, and then colour it... That's how you'll get fatter forcefield, but it'll look cleaner Example:[Broken External Image]:http://spd.fotologs.net/photo/29/31/50/serbia_history/1164268618_f.jpg I think of the fat orange line...
the 3d was uspposed to be drop shadow..aha..but it looked morelike 3d..so i carried it on..oh well..thanks
BUMP never got critique. Amk: Besides the 3D, do one, fluid line while outlining. If you have one line fatter, try cutting back.
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amk, regarding the white: you should put it on every place a letter bends unless its completly shaded from the angle of light jers: drop the massive amount of arrows (especially the one making a circle) and if you wanna do extensions, dont make them going inward like the top on s. make it the same width all around. remember. they are letters not drawings (you dont do a letter when you normally write in hand with a fat bottom and a very slim top right?)