heres some new sketches crits nothin on this page, so im not givin any View attachment 281828 View attachment 281829 View attachment 281830 View attachment 281831 View attachment 281832
geks, your color schemes are decent, but definitely work on your blending. the 4th one down has a bit of potential in my opinion. keep sketching. enue, the structure on that second one is horrendous. way too many unneeded bars. keep working on it. linkzone, i think its beautiful. cant read it. that could just be me being the toy i am though. ha. nick, try to clean up your lines. drakula, move your letters closer together in the first one. or at least construct your A differently so it doesn't look so seperated from the R. i love that D though. still tryin to evolve. [Broken External Image]:http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/scabs8.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/scabs7.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/scabs6.jpg
scab, like the second, the third is to skinny, fatten up the lines, idk. the first one u can get more glare and shadows idk whatever..
scab beleive it or not i kinda like your idea on the first one althought id just work alot more on cleaning your lines. 2nd throwie isnt to bad, and the third is alright, although again, keep it clean. its good that your taking everyones advice on doing simples first to get your lettes and lines clean. keep it up. TODAY"S PIECES Those lyrics or Dr. Dre FYI
Cezr...I kinda took your speech bubble and the gold tooth thing, hope you don't mind bro. [Broken External Image]:http://ic3.deviantart.com/fs17/i/2007/161/8/8/Black_and_White____by_SUMOE.jpg
this looks so much like fula. im not saying its a bite or ne bullshit, it just struck me. something abt the picture itself to, the brownness of the lines. wierd. umm. im not really being helpful. tell me ur not actually from japan? thats freaking me out. haha. so yeahh.
hahaha// sume i like that.. what if yoy give one a missing tooth? or chipped. or corn in between it..
the browness is just my printer being too "high quality" and makin gray lines brown.. why does japan frak you out?
haha, yeah, I'ma make a lot of these, only take 5-10 minutes to make... I'll probably do some missing teeth and shit like that. edit: as for your piece, it kinda does look like Fula did it; not the letters though, just the overall look...weirdddd. looks messy and the lines could be cleaner but the letters themselves are pretty decent, just make sure the bars don't get too fucked up, lose those arrows too.
its just in pencil dude. lol. itll be cleaner. and i dont know what fulas stuff looks like can you show me?
ha. isnt that what advice is for? i guess im just not an idiot like most toys. do you think that throw is worthy of painting at all? i have some interesting ideas for fills.
[Broken External Image]:http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/3461/needsworkct5.th.jpg does the "s" match the a and the n?... crits so far