quoted for truth. and jroc. do that. and just go crazy with your hand. eventually it'll start flowing. some other guy told me to fill a notebook up with handstyles and just sketch them a bunch. it helped a lot as i got new ideas to "change it up" a bit.
thx dg here one of the burners i think i might doo lol um that other one is for fun cuz grape is my hombre lmao um ye we in the same crew more crits lol oh i think the burner might be in the wrong sectioin but w.e
so you should resize it... the top one is better than the bottom. the bottom one is pretty much script writing. you should work on your letter structure a bit. check out some other tags online to get more ideas of structure.
okay some shit i did today when i was out... crits? [Broken External Image]:http://photos-c.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sf2p/v81/191/95/883910653/n883910653_671894_4951.jpg[Broken External Image]:http://photos-d.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sf2p/v81/191/95/883910653/n883910653_671899_5947.jpg[Broken External Image]:http://photos-a.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sf2p/v81/191/95/883910653/n883910653_671900_6201.jpg[Broken External Image]:http://photos-b.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sf2p/v81/191/95/883910653/n883910653_671901_6477.jpg
btw the whole wide shit wasnt my fault... its bc that dude didnt resize so my images stacked weird like
dega - the 1st one is the best. you could shorten the underline on it a little. the one on the table, i cant even read. but yeah, do more like the 1st pic. cyber - i'm pretty sure you got some crits on that and you should give some crits before you ask. but all in all its a nice tag. you could do without the orange clouds around it but i think someone already said that. here's one i was jus messin with. [Broken External Image]:http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u110/masokstk/32BS1.jpg crits welcome.
bumpster maso im feelin all the letters on that. got some nice flow and everything... i love your style. EDIT- cyerone the orange clouds or wahtever they are take away from it being a tag. add a little more flare and itll be tight okay heres some new attempts at Es let me know wahts good and wahts sucks ahah [Broken External Image]:http://photos-653.ll.facebook.com/photos-ll-sf2p/v81/191/95/883910653/n883910653_673525_986.jpg[Broken External Image]:http://photos-653.ll.facebook.com/photos-ll-sf2p/v81/191/95/883910653/n883910653_673526_1240.jpg[Broken External Image]:http://photos-653.ll.facebook.com/photos-ll-sf2p/v81/191/95/883910653/n883910653_673527_1496.jpg[Broken External Image]:http://photos-653.ll.facebook.com/photos-ll-sf2p/v81/191/95/883910653/n883910653_673528_1748.jpg[Broken External Image]:http://photos-653.ll.facebook.com/photos-ll-sf2p/v81/191/95/883910653/n883910653_673529_1997.jpg
yo what up .. my friend does this shit and its hot, was gonna start doin it with him but i dont have a tag need a lil practice at it.. people call me linx or pizzy <my nicknames> but i dont know what it would look like if it was tagged up anywhere.. can someone give me an idea.. thnx
im pretty sure theres a thread... "new to graffiti? start here." and it like auto combined my 2 posts so dont over look the new Es
for nero saine some-make your s softer not jagged look a tmaso's s. dont' use such a big marker just get a regular sharpie. maso- nice feeling that ish maybe lose the quotations. cyber one- nice and simple.
even though the E still sucks, hows that S? and yeah the underlines way too long idc right now..[Broken External Image]:http://photos-653.ll.facebook.com/photos-ll-sf2p/v81/191/95/883910653/n883910653_674440_2999.jpg
FUCK THIS SHIT. I just wrote out mad crits for everyone on the page and then instead of hitting shift + R I hit ctrl + r, and lost it all. So I'll quickly summerize. Cyerone, shit's nice and simple, just watch your can control, try and keep all the flairs in the same places. Masokst, looks real nice, use the T from the tag in your sig, and watch the K almost looks like an R. Teze, your mum will be angry when she sees that shit the lower case e looks better IMO, maybe try and use an uppercase N instead, it would give it some nice symmetry with the A. Some, the S isn't too bad, 'O' is a shit letter, you're on your own with that one, either make the m all curves or all straight, half and half rarely works, try a lower case e instead. Siran, add some curves bro, curves mang. And just a note to everyone, we all help each other out here, there shouldn't be a select few that stand around just to give out crits. If you would like to have your work criticised please crit everyone from the last 4 or so pictures or don't expect to get anything in return.
I think the second on down looks the best, keep at that one, im feeling it could get somewhere. I need some ideas for "eske" PM me some of ur guys shit out there that I can mess around w/. Itd be much appreciated. And NO, im not gonna bite it, everyones style came from somewhere.
Yo siran work on kinda adding a little something to the letters , i think i like the last one the best because it looks like you could work with it more.. but ya change it up a little , all in all i like it.