stumpy- cant even see the letters in that one liner... lose the arrows and dont worry too much about color right now just letters DIM- i really like that style but the letters are different sizes and i dont see that arrow fitting anywhere CYBER- those letters are dope keep it uppp CYTO- really like that K, maybe dont lean your letters that much to the side? some sorta recent stuff, im gonna paint the top one soon just not sure bout the colors TELL MEEEE WUTTT YUU THENNNK [Broken External Image]:http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/8672/craigslsitcw7.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/2231/craigslsit002fx9.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/7476/craigslsit004ou1.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/7476/craigslsit004ou1.9c3c18ea20.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/5905/craigslsit005rg7.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/5905/craigslsit005rg7.bb6219a5b2.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/2093/craigslsit008ll9.jpg
emel -- diggin it all. sex E on the RES piece. last one is hot. dim -- D is for dope. got a scanner, wanted to test it out so i did a quickie [Broken External Image]:http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/1629/untitled1om8.png
yo my boy Morne in that sketch up there ^^ your R is so fucked up hahahah keep workin on that shit your inproving
emel- nice colors, keep goin at er stumpyhasnolegs- stay simple, your jumping to conclusion View attachment 299359 View attachment 299360
sev -- tone down on the fills, especially the first one. looks like someone's lunch came back up on paper :X. put more work into your letters.
yea i was just lookin at the sketch n was like my N is an eyesore... ill have more shit up ina few days
i was actually going for the "puke" look on the first one. fuck, its a good thing someone relized what my first bomb was trying to represent
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that first one is an old name [Broken External Image]:http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/5360/0829070135io7.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/5868/0829070141gi9.jpg
cyber- real clean good stucture i like it kelio- sorry bud but the only think i like at all is the top char phlank- im really likin it especially the first one i think the black spills kinda ruined your second one but i love the letters also, loose the arrows kor- make your o the same size as the other letters rk- i would say loose that extension on the top of your r calculating - i agree with dusk on your first two and i like your second two [Broken External Image]:http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/9151/dscn0217rd2.jpg crits please
to me, your m seems too spaced in the middle for the rest and the gap in the r between the head and the leg looks weird.
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I dont really like the top part of the O, hte part that extends off of the N seems a bit large...But once again, keep practicing those R's
silent -- those things coming out of the top of your letters? don't do em, looks bad. work on that R, don't slant your letters yet. so you know too, when you use your markers, put a piece of paper under the page you're doing so it doesn't bleed through to the next page. shred -- work on that M and fix that R. the right leg of the R shouldn't start under the base of the curve, it should start at the base of the curve infinity -- hot throws, can't say the same for the piece. keep doin your thing fatel -- work on the consistency of your letters, clean up your piecing too. and an FYI, there is another SOBR already out there [Broken External Image]:http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/1629/untitled1om8.png edit: something I worked on since this was originally posted. feel like it's very sky5/skeelo influenced. [Broken External Image]:http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/8/untitled2sf7.png will work on later... need sleep now.