thanks for crits jers like youre style but i might make the dot on the J higher (so its not touchin the letter) but same shape
sorry for the shit flick. not finished. and idk if you can read it but for all the old heads there's an i love box on the far right with me shout outss <333
jers the top of ur r dosent fit relly i think if u did it like this or something [Broken External Image]:http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/262/jerslz1.png it would look ill or dont your shit is tight already
Borg - that shit looks great! Fox - don't like it... soz Jers - great. I think that the "J" dot is fine there... i'm gonna do a trho up in the train tracks and I wuz thinkin of doin smthin like this: ya think I should fill it with a colour or with white??
Smae: Yeah mate, good to see you're doing basic.. but I think you need to work on your lettering a bit more before getting it up. Sketch sketch sketch =]
smae: i think there pretty basic and pretty good for a beginniger(sp) but you need to get more confiedent(sp) but here is my first sketch in a while wat cha think?
yeah gumdrop i like it its really progressive from you. i see allot of influences i think iv seen other places not like a bite but like things influencing ur style and its lookin good. the one thing is that the E really isnt working. u mighta known that tho. and the top of the s, the bars get too thin and it makes it stand out from the rest. i like ur other letters but the arrow in the R is outa place. good arrow. but it dont fit the style and its the only one. id hack it out/. smae. theres not really anything wrong with painting at any skill level. half the dudes on here dont paint. and thats graff. toy or not. id say go get some experience in every part of the game. and as far as that sketch. the squiglly line in the S is whack. make it streight (unless that was a mistake) and dont curve the top of it up like that. just bring it to a streight end. (< the top of the S) .. the bars in the E get a bit squiggly. but for sure do some painting. get can control. and keep sketching keep it simple. just dont paint toy stuff somewhere where ur gonna have to see it everyday for a year or so. do it places where its for practice not for ups. until u get better. o and dont get caught.
smae, IM gonna go along with scare, it all just takes practice, time and some determination ...good advice on not painting somewhere youll regret wish i heard it earlier at one point gumdrop, the AN looks pretty good together but then youre spacing goes a little whakc and by the time you get to ER the letters are completely different. besides that it looks pretty decent. heres some freepenning shit ive been working on since school started... yesterday. in just those few days ive seen quite a bit of progress myself. [Broken External Image]:http://img479.imageshack.us/img479/1659/mrscorralyq5.jpg ignore english 3, super quicky lol
[Broken External Image]:http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a205/DJDJ06/002.jpg this any good its my firs sketch with my new name
Behemoth- answer looks good but personally i dont like the S SKOE- nice S but i rekon lose the extra bit on the O i tried this name out its GRAWP and its the first sketch ive done with it and u can see the tag crits plz
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im really fuckin diggin that K the P not so much and thanks every one for the crits i do hope i can get some more