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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. fox on a trampoline

    fox on a trampoline Member

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    thanks for crits jers like youre style but i might make the dot on the J higher (so its not touchin the letter) but same shape
     
  2. darthbaker

    darthbaker Senior Member

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    new shit popout thing pretty awful fill but i like it

    goddamn at that borg sticker
     
  3. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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    sorry for the shit flick.
    not finished.
    ai5.photobucket.com_albums_y158_AlexheartsJennifer_cantstopthis.jpg

    and idk if you can read it but for all the old heads there's an i love box on the far right with me shout outss
    <333
     
  4. blue.steel

    blue.steel Senior Member

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  5. darthbaker

    darthbaker Senior Member

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    the only thing wrong with that is it makes it look more like an A..
     
  6. Smae

    Smae Member

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    Borg - that shit looks great!
    Fox - don't like it... soz
    Jers - great. I think that the "J" dot is fine there...

    i'm gonna do a trho up in the train tracks and I wuz thinkin of doin smthin like this: aa268.ac_images.myspacecdn.com_images01_100_l_34f9e199df36d3357e9ff4534c143683.png
    ya think I should fill it with a colour or with white??
     
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  7. smikoer

    smikoer Senior Member

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    Smae:
    Yeah mate, good to see you're doing basic.. but I think you need to work on your lettering a bit more before getting it up. Sketch sketch sketch =]
     
  8. Gumdrop.Behemoth

    Gumdrop.Behemoth Senior Member

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    smae: i think there pretty basic and pretty good for a beginniger(sp) but you need to get more confiedent(sp)

    but here is my first sketch in a while
    wat cha think?
    ai79.photobucket.com_albums_j138_AIRGEE2302_IMG_0013.jpg
     
  9. Scare2

    Scare2 Senior Member

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    yeah gumdrop i like it its really progressive from you. i see allot of influences i think iv seen other places not like a bite but like things influencing ur style and its lookin good. the one thing is that the E really isnt working. u mighta known that tho. and the top of the s, the bars get too thin and it makes it stand out from the rest. i like ur other letters but the arrow in the R is outa place. good arrow. but it dont fit the style and its the only one. id hack it out/.

    smae. theres not really anything wrong with painting at any skill level. half the dudes on here dont paint. and thats graff. toy or not. id say go get some experience in every part of the game. and as far as that sketch. the squiglly line in the S is whack. make it streight (unless that was a mistake) and dont curve the top of it up like that. just bring it to a streight end. (< the top of the S) .. the bars in the E get a bit squiggly. but for sure do some painting. get can control. and keep sketching keep it simple.

    just dont paint toy stuff somewhere where ur gonna have to see it everyday for a year or so. do it places where its for practice not for ups. until u get better.

    o and dont get caught.
     
  10. the end

    the end Senior Member

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    smae, IM gonna go along with scare, it all just takes practice, time and some determination :) ...good advice on not painting somewhere youll regret wish i heard it earlier at one point ;)

    gumdrop, the AN looks pretty good together but then youre spacing goes a little whakc and by the time you get to ER the letters are completely different. besides that it looks pretty decent.

    heres some freepenning shit ive been working on since school started... yesterday. in just those few days ive seen quite a bit of progress myself.
    [Broken External Image]:http://img479.imageshack.us/img479/1659/mrscorralyq5.jpg
    ignore english 3, super quicky lol
     
  11. skoe

    skoe Senior Member

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  12. Gumdrop.Behemoth

    Gumdrop.Behemoth Senior Member

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    which of my letters looks "influnced" can you let me kno cuz all I think that in influncedd is the R
     
  13. skoe

    skoe Senior Member

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    i like your A its pretty fresh
     
  14. vice versa

    vice versa Member

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    Behemoth- answer looks good but personally i dont like the S

    SKOE- nice S but i rekon lose the extra bit on the O

    i tried this name out its GRAWP and its the first sketch ive done with it and u can see the tag

    ai183.photobucket.com_albums_x136_Fonzie9_100_0201.jpg

    crits plz
     
  15. South-Pole

    South-Pole Elite Member

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    Simples Simples Simples Simples!!!
     
  16. klipa

    klipa Senior Member

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  17. Gumdrop.Behemoth

    Gumdrop.Behemoth Senior Member

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    im really fuckin diggin that K the P not so much
    and thanks every one for the crits i do hope i can get some more
     
  18. thesilentvandal

    thesilentvandal Banned

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  19. Edward"Sezer"Hands

    Edward"Sezer"Hands Elite Member

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  20. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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    i got nothing on this just wondering if i should finish it.

    ps
    Daws, you bite.