Menu

Welcome!

By registering with us, you'll be able to discuss, share and private message with other members of our community.

Blackbooks

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

Share This Page

  1. eQust-tbk

    eQust-tbk Senior Member

    • Messages: 140
    • Likes Received: 0
  2. huskinator

    huskinator Senior Member

    • Messages: 110
    • Likes Received: 0
  3. NEOZ

    NEOZ Member

    • Messages: 26
    • Likes Received: 0
  4. librelikespie

    librelikespie Senior Member

    • Messages: 162
    • Likes Received: 0
  5. vice versa

    vice versa Member

    • Messages: 23
    • Likes Received: 0
    heres just some crits, and btw i dont bite amk okay?

    damn this page is sick
    neoz, really like ure full page sketching stuff lol
    huskinator, thats a dope sketch for equst
    equst, im really diggin ure letter structuress
    noxi, ure getting better already man, gw
    narsyone, man uve been killin these last few pages with some real fresh stuff, keep it up plus give crits to get some ay
    nem, nice scab blue and yella throw plus uve been getting much better
    librelikespie, its alright try and make things cleaner and wat part of aus u live in??
     
  6. NaRsyONE*

    NaRsyONE* Senior Member

    • Messages: 70
    • Likes Received: 1
    Noxi.just keep doing what your doing add some bends n your own style maybe some fills to. Equst.love the whole sketch colors style n everthing going on dope. Kors.dig the style n characters but some of the S's look like T's to me but I still like the sketches
     
  7. amk

    amk Elite Member

    • Messages: 578
    • Likes Received: 0
    no offence mate but these letters are pretty bad...the S is pretty ill....but take away the extensions on the other letters and you can see the flaws...i mean the I is non exisitant....and the structure of the first N is way unproportioned...and the last N looks like a M....you gotta chill out and focus on those letters and not focus so much on the extensions to hide these bad letters

    i say again no e-beef as im jus tryna tell you what i think and bascially try to help you

    Narsy also.
    man quit posting one pic after another continusley....i mean....just post as many pics as you want in ONE POST.
    your work i dont really feel.....id say tone it down....but keep messing with fills as itll help you out when you paint....also....you posted a pic with a lil pen freestyle throw up in the corner out or focus...it was fucking ill...try n find it.

    keep up the good work
    im out
    peace.
     
  8. bountyhunter113

    bountyhunter113 Elite Member

    • Messages: 1,268
    • Likes Received: 0
    lib- i like that char, develop it....not likin ur letters tho
    equst- yea, i agree wif wut amk said
    neoz- that "O" in the first piece is wack
    husk- yea i'm rly likin dat too

    some doodling yesterday:
    ai94.photobucket.com_albums_l93_bountyhunter114_Halloween.png
    ai94.photobucket.com_albums_l93_bountyhunter114_TAC2.png
    ^this one was for a TAC(Themed Art Contest) on Deviantart, if u check out the deviation it'll make more sense

    yea, make sure u leave a comment/view my DeviantArt profile if ya get a chance:
    http://bountyhunter113.deviantart.com/
     
    Last edited: Oct 8, 2007
  9. NaRsyONE*

    NaRsyONE* Senior Member

    • Messages: 70
    • Likes Received: 1
  10. NaRsyONE*

    NaRsyONE* Senior Member

    • Messages: 70
    • Likes Received: 1
  11. Bon3s

    Bon3s Senior Member

    • Messages: 76
    • Likes Received: 1
    bump for crits. narsy: your shit is fuckin hot. i REALLY like the way you're puttin those colors and shit toigether, its nice. is you ever wanna do a swap or something, hit me up.
    noxi: its alright, but try and add a font to it, its very boxy and just square-ish. if you added a little bit of..like..flair? or something it would look better. i wish there was a diff. word than flair, that sounds so homo lol.
     
  12. NaRsyONE*

    NaRsyONE* Senior Member

    • Messages: 70
    • Likes Received: 1
    Noxi:lol he just needs some ....FAZAZ
     
  13. NEZ89

    NEZ89 Senior Member

    • Messages: 271
    • Likes Received: 0
    Nars-the stickets are sick
    Bon3s-with the execption of the spoonlike thing extending from the M it pretty decent
     
  14. NaRsyONE*

    NaRsyONE* Senior Member

    • Messages: 70
    • Likes Received: 1
    I don't rly know I'm not to into those kinda old n don't like the structure but w.e thanks for critts that 'NEZ'is nice
     
  15. bountyhunter113

    bountyhunter113 Elite Member

    • Messages: 1,268
    • Likes Received: 0
    bump, i alrdy gave critz............how come i always give cNc, but no1 ever gives me cNc??!

    bon3s- i dont like the fill
     
  16. SKA11289

    SKA11289 Senior Member

    • Messages: 67
    • Likes Received: 0
    bountyhunter- those characters are sick man.


    First time ive posted in like a year, crits?
    awww.mypicshare.com_thumbs_20071008_40x8lycv.gif

    awww.mypicshare.com_thumbs_20071008_o8ivdx4c.gif

    awww.mypicshare.com_thumbs_20071008_5we68xee.gif

    awww.mypicshare.com_thumbs_20071008_tvhg63kp.gif

    awww.mypicshare.com_thumbs_20071008_y6jzf3vd.gif
     
  17. NaRsyONE*

    NaRsyONE* Senior Member

    • Messages: 70
    • Likes Received: 1
    That first ones my fav PORKYS SO FRESH
     
  18. NaRsyONE*

    NaRsyONE* Senior Member

    • Messages: 70
    • Likes Received: 1
    The other A's look more like lower case d's to me
     
  19. MainEvent

    MainEvent Senior Member

    • Messages: 410
    • Likes Received: 1
    bones- i like the fill alot, just bang out the letters a little better.

    nez- that sketch of the writer is really really nice. keep sketching and working on your letters because with talent like that on the character, you'll be able to do some dope shit once you get more experience. good fill on the second, nice work overall for starting out. stay up

    ak- good shit. first piece is nice and simple. i like the second and fourth throwies the best. nice work


    just a little concept piece i wanna do. im sure its been done before so i really dont care about dudes saying "hey its been done, and better!" like the time i posted the panda ish. just wanna get some crits on the letters mostly cause thats where im struggling. solid black is one style, crosshatched is another, and the dots is where they intersect and overlap.

    [Broken External Image]:http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/100_1704.jpg
     
  20. amk

    amk Elite Member

    • Messages: 578
    • Likes Received: 0
    the N A ones are nice
    but pretty unoriginal iv seen it before.
    none the less not bad.
    also.
    for god sake
    stop posting 4 times in one go.
    there is nothing to get when posting.
    you say all you want to say in one post.
    just like i am now.

    BoutnyHunter...does this look like the char thread ? ... nah...no offence but i fort you was better...if i put it the way i think then i think those chars their whack....the look like no effort as been put into them..like a limp cock.
    n the fact you posted them in the big boy char thread is rediculous..
    c'mon man.
    work on your lettering.

    fuck i aint posted SHIT for so long.
    i aint been able to sketch.
    school and shit ...
    i just carnt wait till next August when shits over.
    then ill be painting,sketching , bombing , shit like that constantly...

    so here is an old one...im sorry for the lack of peices from me...maybe ill rustle sumthing up as im doing some graphic design / graffiti type shit for art class...

    so here is a couple of my favourites..

    View attachment 308353

    View attachment 308354

    View attachment 308355

    View attachment 308356

    View attachment 308357

    Comments welcome..
    peace.
    keep up the work guys