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Can I get some critique?
Kobra: Might want to tighten up the R and A. It kinda loses its flow at the end. Looking good though
sex without condoms: Nice M. Try to throw some 3D and fills in there.
Too cold and wet walls. Any comments on the letter structure? I know it's...
Bump. Any critique?
AnteUp-2 seems good. If you balanced the throwie more. It'd look sick.
garbage down tha way- Dope R. The E is a little unoriginal but it flows...
ninja_303_763: Not bad but try shading your character. It'll be good.
The yellow throw up has potential crik. Keep working on itand give your letters more style. Connect them different and form them a little...
Still didn't get any critique.
Bullshit. LK is a five pointed crown. You're either a toy or a wannabe gang banger.
BUMP never got critique.
Amk: Besides the 3D, do one, fluid line while outlining. If you have one line fatter, try cutting back.
Dope shit Chalk. Awesome can control.
writer45 - Rock simples more and don't have your letters twist like that.
Alive - Nice solid letters. I like a lot.
Don't write Stak. Damn learn your history.
Stak the Ripper
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Dizzle D: Work on your flow more with the letters. Make them fit better with one another.
virtuallynameless: As for letter structure, work on the flow of the piece. It seems to get jammed up after the E. Work on your final halo so it...
Gotta go with Gesus. I love the style he gots going on.
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