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[attach] Can I get some critique? Kobra: Might want to tighten up the R and A. It kinda loses its flow at the end. Looking good though Resk:...
sex without condoms: Nice M. Try to throw some 3D and fills in there. Too cold and wet walls. Any comments on the letter structure? I know it's...
Bump. Any critique?
AnteUp-2 seems good. If you balanced the throwie more. It'd look sick. garbage down tha way- Dope R. The E is a little unoriginal but it flows...
ninja_303_763: Not bad but try shading your character. It'll be good. [Broken External...
The yellow throw up has potential crik. Keep working on itand give your letters more style. Connect them different and form them a little...
Still didn't get any critique. [attach]
Bullshit. LK is a five pointed crown. You're either a toy or a wannabe gang banger.
BUMP never got critique. Amk: Besides the 3D, do one, fluid line while outlining. If you have one line fatter, try cutting back.
Dope shit Chalk. Awesome can control. [attach] Crits?
writer45 - Rock simples more and don't have your letters twist like that. Alive - Nice solid letters. I like a lot. [Broken External...
Don't write Stak. Damn learn your history. Stak the Ripper [Broken External Image]:http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/9667/wmcm3.jpg
Dizzle D: Work on your flow more with the letters. Make them fit better with one another. [Broken External...
virtuallynameless: As for letter structure, work on the flow of the piece. It seems to get jammed up after the E. Work on your final halo so it...
Gotta go with Gesus. I love the style he gots going on.
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