keke- keep doing simples. by that you can work up your style. don't worry about quotes yet. arrows are usually really retarded looking and nobody does them anymore. like i said though just keep working it name on paper.
View attachment 346279 crits? broad daylight tag. rocketeer- make the o the same size, maybe add a cool little extra on the end. make the bottom of the e extend to the U maybe? looks cool though
I fucking hate the people posting in the toys forum jsut saying " dont pick up a writing utensil again unless its to blah blah blah" seriously STFU. Give toys like me and the other toys out their advice. We don't want that kind of fuckin' support.
haha i gotcha. but just some more advice i think a little less 3d on the L in the first one would work for ya
get rid of the arrows that are comming from who knows where. work on the flow of your letters and even 3D.
yeaa bro, only use arrows once you know how to shape em the right way and your piece start flowing, for now, stick to basics. all about flow.
Alt, your S looks alright but the rest of your tag needs to be fixed. Maybe draw your T different and The o and p neater.