soboe- liking the vomet but not so sure about the vom . the v on the vom looks more like a u or a j. crits?
First post here..... Just wanted to get something up here. I'm working on my simple letters, this is before I read anything here. crits more than welcome. I just started writing less than a week ago.
k well first thing your wanna gunna do is practice letter structure... make block letters and keep all the bars the same width and try to keep the letters the same size... ill show what i mean later today unless someone else gets to it first cause i probly wont be home later today
AEK: likin that first throwie. A LOT sheds: structure youll get it. SEz: the 3d is dope MAG: feelin the yello throwie and the N
SHEDS: it looks better but try spreading the letters out.. blockbuster style. Marker fades arnt easy haha
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that last vomet bomb is ILLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sez- fresh sank- that bomb is good. your styles are tight, try them seperately bread- its alright, try overlapping your letters fish- if you dont want to drop the bubbly style, use bars and just round them off jels- keep using bars, lose the extensions cher- illin, try a new top on the e or make it lowercase munk- coloring is good, try straighter letters crits on mine?
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Th ridges around the eyes arent uniform, unless they aren't supposed to be a pair. your S is crooked compared to your B, the hole in the bottom of your S is not the same size and the pink is missing.
TRUE THAT! LOL. ahahha. light 40 - them black, red and white....seeeeexxy! i likey. gimme some. lol. seywhat - thank you for the crits. im tryna get my letters right before i do anything to them. im feelin the colors on yours. the letters look a lil on the thin side. i think if you beef them up just a tad bit, itd be sexier. but its nice. i can see some nice stuff headed your way wit it. aek - im feelin the throw. shit would look mad hot inverted too i bet. the only one im iffy about is the last one. but you still doin good. eskimo2 - HOTNESS!! lol. =p