directed towards SAID. my bad.

 

jihad how long does it take you to throw that up?
-boxes are for throwups not tags to me tags should be smooth I can't rlly tell what it says there all connected.
the last was the best b/c you could see the R and the m. Mord am I correct?
i like the d tho try makin the rest like that style b/c it goes from straight lines to 1 smooth letter... or make the d like the rest b/c I love the R. you just cant see it if the D is right on the d "space it wayy out dude"

 

lol MY BAD specify..

 

and besides you were looking at me critiquing ANDRO(your mord). sry for all the confusion.

 

work on the flow.
put your letters closer together.

 

so much 4 only pics in this thread .......
i dont c ne on this page

 

bumps

 

and try to add some curve to the D and M my brutha.

 

so it does say andro.sorry for the mistake but wtf its all connected..dont lay the lines on top of each other ....

 

kaze - pretty dope, nice flow

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doesent look bad kaze

 

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crits?

bzar. keep workin on it. make it flow.
kaze. thats nice and simple. flows decent to.

crits?

 

kaze- bend or tilt those letters
kabs- pushem together more
ofb- lose the extra doo dads
new 2 liner
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CRITS

 

not feeling that style san.
Riot-lean up the o and i'd change the B and N a bit so it can flow with that sick E.
Crit please

 

yeah i know. ive gotta work on that hand alot.

just got to simple letters.
straight em up. like make them vertical you know?

 

cuddling, size it down please

 

kabs- keep the letters at the same tilt. like your k is kinda slanted, but the rest are standing straight up. also, make your a fit the rest of the style, move them together and it should be pretty sick.

 

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crits ya'll.