damn borg thats going to turn out ill i love the character chump i cant do ps to save my life so i can really help you there but work on the right side of the m like where the bump is keep working on that throw the more you do it the better it will get
"P" at least in my mind is pretty difficult to do with any style. PBT Krew out here does it well along with PHAT but.... hmmmmm. no real advice to give about that topic honestly. HOWEVER alot of people i this thread tend to overlook or dismiss style altogther. Which you have in spades. Props on the "C" I love it. it looks pissed. its great. and in the end style is what really counts next to letter structure. props
Borg - mad fresh charcs as always Chump something about the C is just off try messin around with the inner curve View attachment 348756 View attachment 348757 crits?
Dude.. please... you've been bumping the same throw for fucking days. Development isn't simply about asking for crits and getting other people's opinions. I developed my style where I am today with hardly anybody's input at all. I sketched and sketched for now almost 2 years without getting crits from anybody, and it's got me pretty far. Don't be afraid to mess around with your letters, you alone decide on what exactly you want, other people can't do all the work for you. Please stop bumping this throw. Sorry to go off on a tangent. it's a decently solid style.. very generic, but work with it, see what you can come up with.
You didn't do anything wrong, I'm just saying try to work some things out for yourself, feel me? Read what I edited into my other post too.
Borg - dope as letters of course. im hopin youre gonna put somethin where the character is. and by the way, he looks sick. chump - the p...hmmm....i hate p's. everything else is on point. i love how you got the flops to em. but the p...uhm, try givin it that little upper right point curve thing like you got on the other letters, and then the base, thin it out just a little to match the rest of them. you know? try that out. i think it might work. atlok - that shit is fresh as hell man! i know youre gonna add color right? im lovin the style. on point. the extensions balance out nicely as well. so im tryin out another name, esoes. tried writin it a bit ago before i started watchin LA Ink. lol, but here you go. crits?:
Revid you fucking toy, stop writing blesu. You'll bring a bad rep to the word you fucking toy. learn how to do throw up's and stop using the texta's your parents bought you for school. Blesu FT COP ATS
oh, and evasion i completely skipped you - im diggin the MN more than anything. im likin the color and shit. the guy, i dunno so much about him, but its straight. i could see it developin more. the pandas cute. lol. but this thread poppin
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