chump- on the first throw make your C and P like your hum... it looks really sick. and take out the random lines above the right leg bumps.
I like 'em both, but I like how you drew the C in the second one. Put that C in the first throw (because the C in the first one might look like an R to some people...and frankly I'd rather be a chump than a rhump ) and I think you'll be golden. Maybe put more of a face on the P ghostie so it looks more...Casper-ish...I dunno. Good stuff, though...
Don't get me wrong i'm a die hard anime fan, from bleach to trinity blood, and every single gundam series, but there's no more originality when drawing manga
its just thaat drawin manga is so formulaic, mangas cool to read and shit, fuck all the fag ones like nurto, give me that ultra violent shit like devilman http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2lP8y39CJiI&feature=related
thanks for the crit guys, and atlok did you mean making a more circular bottom when you said puff, of just wider? Atlok-it's damn sick, what exactly do you write because having trouble reading all the letters in it. I love the 3D fill, like to see the inner part filled.
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thanks. i meant like to just make them more blown up like. like wider and more circular at the bottoms. ps it reads CAIS
i like it atlok but other then some things its a bunch of sticks mashed together. im not seeing meny letters there. but who am i to judge? eh? View attachment 353131 View attachment 353132 View attachment 353133 View attachment 353134 View attachment 353135 View attachment 353136 a lot old, some new. crits welcome.
Evasion, I like the second one. Did you use a ballpoint pen for that? I like the way it looks like Gumby or something. Isn't there some unwritten rule though about putting a crown in your stuff? Fube, I especially like the second one. The rabbit ears on the O is cool. Hey, everyone, is there a trick to having a really cool tag at the bottom? Do you figure that out the same as you do for your pieces, or is that more whatever you feel like?
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Lope, I meant to comment on this earlier. I like it a lot. I like that the letters are readable, but they still look good, and I really dig the head on the I. It's a nice change from people doing spray caps on their I's. Well done. Can't wait to see a coloured version.
lope-nice shit, cant wait for some color. only crit i guess is the E seems a little top heavy, as in i wouldn't mind the bottom of it being a bit larger and the top a little smaller. new throwie, crit please *ADJUSTMENTS MADE*
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first try on kinda 3d...lol A name im messing with.... Crits suggestion? Agony? im lovin the style...i dont like the upside cross most of the time but it looks dope on that A...
ehhhh agony not feeling it so much, seems it's missing flow. Thanks for the crit. Jinx-Nice stuff man, the J doesn't work so great in the first one.