bigger V still needs some work, and fucked up fill on second scoot- I like the olik part but the h is a bit off, at least round the ends of the bars off on it i'd say
Atlok7 - I dont see anything in that scketh... I'd say to you to not not put too much things in it. make it more sample, and it would look better
View attachment 354399 Went shit when I coloured it.Says RAB That Busy piece up there is nice.Looks like a freestyle too.Props.
bump drakula- the fill looks interesting but in general the whole thing is a bit messed up, tone it down and try the same style and it might work better
vois, that looks pretty decent. you should make the base of the V a bit smaller imo. keep the letters the same size. caiser, thats pretty sick, its kinna hard to make out. but it looks good. i actually prefer your previous couple of sketches.' busy, that looks good, im not feelin the arm that connects your "B" and "U" imo [Broken External Image]:http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/9487/belspiece1ey4.jpg
that busy is nice take off some of the useless addons on the Y [Broken External Image]:http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/5074/picture1270dd8.jpg Stickers goin to seyar [Broken External Image]:http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/5420/picture1272op5.jpg
been painting maybe 2 months, but just starting to get serious with it. sketched this today in school mayyyne. crit as much as you want, i can take it .
no offence, lay off peicing for awhile. stick to basics, simple letters. once you get that packed down, move it up a notch. and loose the swirls in your throwup.