ATLOK- you have major skill by what I'm seeing... Color and such... But I can't see any letters in that flick. I checked shit you did a while back, and it looks better than what you're doing now by a longshot. Maybe you should return to that? I wanna see what you can pump out in the future.
I can see the letters but each letter is about 8 bars. Join up those bars and only leave a few extensions. Keep the letter shapes, but much simpler.
atlok what if instead of making seperate lines you connect them....i dont really know how to explain it. but like in the c where the top and bottom meet in the middle to another line, take out that middle line and connect the 2, i feel like it would look more like a c. im not really sure or sure if that even made sense tech i like that i, simple but i like it
ATLOK- i think its dope, theres no other style like it, its ok if some retards can't read it, but i think you should keep it like this [Broken External Image]:http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/7766/caisrgreenpurptubingmg5.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/2938/caisrpurplewhitenk8.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/2169/caisrorange3dud2.jpg
word. never seen him bust one simple. its always this million bar stacked up things together...mega boring now.
quick lines for rots- [Broken External Image]:http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/7412/photo178jv7.jpg
It doesn't matter about where the letters are though, and if Rots can't read it, the point it, stop using so many fucking bars. It could actually look good if it was much simpler.
ha if rots cant read it? is rot the all mighty graff god? so if rots can c your letters its shit? hahaha what ever dude
I know where the letters are SUPPOSED to be. But View attachment 355565 View attachment 355566 I can make it say whatever I want and it looks JUST as good. And makes JUST as much sense. View attachment 355567 THIS is what your pieces consist of.
Atlok..get a grip...your stuff has become boring visually now...your always using the same steez !..do summing new
Whatever, take advice or not. Might want to lower your ego you're getting from winning all these battles. You're not going to progress, take it or leave it, it's no skin off my dick. You asked for crits, I gave them. Don't get asshurt.
a7, that shit is dope, but less bars would make it 10000x better. it seems like theres just too much going on. usually with shit like that some can sometimes pick out a few letters right off the bat, but i dont think anyone could without studying it for at least 10 minutes. AHAHAHHAHAHHAH. "letters do not look like this on our planet. no matter what language youre looking at." i still stand by my campaign. Rots For President. 08 & Beyond. aaah, that was hilarious.
I'm not hating you gay shit snot egotistical lunatic faggot piece of cuntrag assbarf, I'm being NICE.
well obviously you aint taking shit into consideration because if you was you wouldnt see what ROTs is saying as " hating "
Because you won't listen to a fucking thing anyone is telling you because you're SOOOO sure you're doing everything right. BECAUSE PEOPLE HAVE BEEN TELLING YOU THE SAME SHIT FOR MONTHS AND YOU ONLY GOT MORE STUPID WITH THE STYLE